Poem: Hurt me while you can...

[Vendetta]

Hurt me while you can,
Abuse me with your hand,
Stab me in the back,
Give my head a wack,
I don't care just hurt me,
Leave buises on my body,
So what if your a man,
Just hurt me while you can.
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Inspired by Princess Ai's poem Kill me I believe the title was.

[jing fi is back]

yea more more.

your poems make you seem really sad and depressed

[Vendetta]

I must state, so no one flips out, I hope no guys took the man part offensively. And, Not all of my poems are sad, Only my recent and extremely old ones...But, look in my profile at my thread for my semi-old poems, and they are all love...

[Daenerys]

This is practically the same poem I posted but worded differently.

[Cat_Demon]

i think this is a good poem, i have an idea from it and i shall go write, or try to, ive had a block, hehe, still it seems like something i would say, nice job

[Vendetta]

This is practically the same poem I posted but worded differently.
And, I shall add that to my original post, after I read you're poem, I got some Ideas. But, this does relate to me, Don't think it is just a pointless group of words.

[Daenerys]

I'm not thinking it's pointless, I'm thinking that it's a complete rip off of my intelecutal property, and I'd perfer if you chose to rip someone off, that it not be me.