Kill Me.

[Daenerys]

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[Vendetta]

WOW! That is great, so short but still so great... I like that you didn't say too many things, so there are many questions in the readers mind left. I sould try to do that.

[suky]

Such a painful poem and strong words Princess Ai, it's beautiful, but painfull*tears*, I hope it's just the poem and not you whos suffering.

[Daenerys]

Weird, I swear I just replied to this.

Unfortunately, I only write when I'm feeling emotional. So yes, I'm going through some hard times right now.

[LittleMomo]

I hope things will get better Princess Ai! ^-^ Wow, what a strong short poem! It's simply beyond good!

[Evangeline]

Weird, I swear I just replied to this.

Unfortunately, I only write when I'm feeling emotional. So yes, I'm going through some hard times right now.
hm, some of the best poems come from emotion. And I agree, I hope things get better for you Princess Ai.
The poem is short but it has a lot of power and feeling in it. I think it rocks! Awesome job!

[Daenerys]

Thank you. It is very rare when I write, and I really love getting such great replies.

[furuba4ever]

such intense feelings of sadness, and pain. YES! I agree, awesome job, and, indeed, I hope that you, Princess Ai, may have better luck coming your way.

[Daimasukí]

(My opinion) It was kind a random, but other than that it was good. I like the way you could express your self without geting all tangled up. Hope to see more.

[Daenerys]

If you knew the situation, it wouldn't be random.

[Fabala]

(My opinion) It was kind a random, but other than that it was good. I like the way you could express your self without geting all tangled up. Hope to see more.
Random how exactly? A poem is typically more likely to connect with a reader emotionally, as not everyone has been in the same situation. I find her feelings clear, even if I did not know the story behind it (which I do).

[THAT GUY]

This seems like a verse from a song rather than a poem

mabey you should make some music??
GANBATE!! <<lol

[Dr.McDoom!]

Hey, i know what yo probably felt like, Ai. I sometimes get like that... Often my idea gets like "Hurt me cause i'm tired of doing it myself..."
But oh well, it's been more than a week and i'm sure you're over it ^^

[Daimasukí]

I apologize for that last comment, I just read it and didn't understand it at first, but know I do.

[Daenerys]

I have no idea why this thread was reported... I see no wrong O_o; If the person whom reported it would PM me and explain, I'd be greatful.

I can kind of understand that, Doom. I used to be like that. It's pretty hard NOT being like that still. But it has been over a week and I'm still pretty hurt about it. One day I'll talk about it, but right now, it's still too fresh.

[Daenerys]

One month has passed. Bump.

[Alias-Revolution]

Adding to the emo-ness of the forum, were we, Ai?

Anyway, I think I could guess what it's about, but I think I'll just shut my trap before I get into trouble. =P

[dna_angel]

Wow! What a great poem! Keep up the good work!