Heroin's Heart

[Daenerys]

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[Capernicus]

Ah.....great rhymes. You took a lot of freedom with the syllable count though...not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing. O.o I like it overall thought. I just wish there were some spelling errors I could correct..... *whimpers*

[Number_the_Stars]

Very creative... good emotion.. show very well with details....very interesting.....

[Daenerys]

Syllable count? I don't count syllables. Nor do I ever try to make my poems rhyme.

[Daenerys]

Yeah it defintely doesn't matter to me either.

[dna_angel]

well... i must say it's a good poem! good rhyming, very emotional, imaginative, and creative... And i also must say you're a good writer.

[animeangellover]

i liked it, its creative and imaginative,good poem!^^

[Daenerys]

Thanks for your comments + Bump