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Lunamaria
04-15-2006, 03:21 PM
If only I known,
It was our last moment together
If only I have shown,
True love
If only you were known,
All over the world,
People would care,
That you're gone

So even if we don't talk for a million years,
Know I've been crying a thousand tears
So even if I say I don't miss you,
Know that it's true,
I really do miss you

So someday we'll know,
If our first kiss was the best
And someday we'll know,
If you were better than the rest
I know it's hard,
I know it's tough
But I know it's gonna be enough

Our love will move a mountain,
And when you go,
I'll cry a fountain
So when you know,
I've always loved you
I'll miss you.

suky
04-15-2006, 04:01 PM
Awwww! Its so beutiful, that even tears of happiness came out! Great job! I hope to see more of these!!

Srien
04-15-2006, 04:03 PM
Nice poem. Its very thoughtfull.

Lunamaria
04-15-2006, 04:21 PM
I felt like writing something off the top of my head.

But thankies. ^_^ ;)

Clarad001
09-02-2006, 10:32 AM
I think it's really good, I felt what you were saying and thats really hard to do'
I really like it ^^