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Fuu Kasumi
03-23-2006, 10:01 PM
I'm such a fool..
You tell me you're at home,
You tell me you're alone,
And I trust in you.

You say you'll always love me,
But then you slightly shove me,
But I still trust in you,
I know that I've been fooled.

Though you plan to leave me here,
You say you'll always be near,
And I trust in you,
I'm such a fool.

When you don't show up,
And I ask you what's up,
I know I'll trust you..
Why am I a fool?

When all this is over,
I'll ask when you first saw her,
Why did I trust you?
How could I be fooled?

Why did I trust you..?

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Annie Hall
06-30-2006, 02:16 PM
This is my favorite of your work I think...It has a very nice flow that I really just love xD!!!<333 Keep on writing. ^.~ I wanna see more.

Daenerys
06-30-2006, 02:17 PM
There is something wrong when BOTH REPLIES to a topic say the SAME THING.

GENERIC "That was cool, keep it up" IS SPAM! I DELETED THEM AND WARNED YOU BOTH!

Do not repost your replies!

Solara, great poem. I can really relate to it, and I love when I can feel an emotion when I read poetry. It shows real skill.

-Kairi-
06-30-2006, 04:30 PM
How sad. ;_; I know what you mean though. When you love someone dearly, it's not that easy to just let them go. Even when you know what they have done.