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Shikito-Oowai
03-20-2006, 10:53 PM
(crashing,smashing,screaming)
I watch this "love couple" as they fight,
As they scream to their might.
(More screaming,more bashing,and crashing)
I slightly shutter in fright,
Yet I wanna laugh cause,
Well,
It didn't seem right...
("I hate you!You bastard!")
I widen my eyes,
As I hear those words in surprise...
("What?!You're a bastard too you know which!")
I had to comment on this,
Or at least say tsk,tsk...
(Screaming,crying,words of regret)
I closed my eyes waiting to hear,
Hear those words that word be near...
("I loved you,but it seems that you never loved me!")
(....)
(silents appears...)
My eyes scan their faces as I only see tears,
But in their eyes they show fears and more tears...
One then leaves,
While the other stays hanging...
How can this be?
Could this be possibly the the ending?
Some words comes out of the person left hanging...
"I love you,and I still do..."
"But I never knew that our ending would come so soon..."
The person then leaves the room,
heart-brokened and hating this too...
(Silents surrounds the room)
(Noon comes in too)
So...
Why?
Why so soon?
Was it meant to be?
Or was it never meant to happen,
at least this soon...

animeangellover
06-27-2006, 05:33 PM
cool poem its very sensational

Aleyna
06-27-2006, 11:40 PM
it reminds me of an adult rated dr. seus
lol its a good suspensing poem :D

lex__luthor
06-28-2006, 12:35 AM
nice that was cool u should write more