Loving You

[Vendetta]

This pain in my heart,
When we are apart,
Is so intense,
All of this makes no Sense,
How could I be in love?
For, you are sent from above.

I know you love another,
That makes this so much tougher,
I need you for my life,
You keep me away from a knife.

How much I saver this,
It is pure bliss,
I am immersed in what you give me,
You give me light to see,
See how much you love me…

3/1/06.. you like? please post tips!^.^

[Astalle]

Wow, this poem's good Vendetta, keep up the good work...

and as for tips, I really can't give you any since your already a good poet ^.^

[Vendetta]

Thank you! I am trying to make non emo poems!!

[Seldrima]

Lol NON emo poems, i'm not emo, yet mine are kinda emo XD, really cool hun! I likey alot, no tips needed, just write whats in your heart. Coolish and pretty^__^

[Vendetta]

I'm not emo either, I just usually write'emo' peoms.. I dunno why... and this is what I feel right now...

[sumomo cute]

That is so good! *tear* I like it. Keep it up!

[blackcat-meow]

oh its so sweet!1 n_n gosh i love love poems ....they always express wat i feel ...*blush*

[Vendetta]

Thank you all ^.^ Your so kind!!

[LittleMomo]

Yes, I love poems especially love ones ^-^

[Vendetta]

Yes, I love poems especially love ones ^-^
Well, at the time that I made this poem, It was for you Lucky!

[Daenerys]

Don't spam, and EMO means EMOTIONAL, all poems, and works of art are emotional. I think it's ignorant to whine about how emo you are not, because being upset is an emotion, and therefore emo.