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Vendetta
02-01-2006, 09:17 PM
tears are what i shed every night,
tears are what fall when i see the light,
tears are what others let loose when in a moment of cheer,
tears are what douse every grave of the ones you hold dear,


smiles are what you will never TRULY see from me,
smiles of infinate for others so let them be,
smiles no longer exist in my mind,
smiles are what you dive when you are kind,

tears are here,
smiles i fear,
tears come so easily,
smiles, so painfully

tears i hold, smiles i sold

any tips? thank you for reading my poem! please enjoy my others!:p

~Saphire~
02-10-2006, 07:47 PM
T-T so sad... sad... sad.... smiles suck- well you get the idea

rodruiguez is fat
02-10-2006, 08:44 PM
beautiful! keep up the good!

Vendetta
04-23-2006, 08:26 PM
HeHe I remember this one! I still think tears are better than smiles... 100% better! Thankies you guys!