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buhbibutterfly
01-24-2006, 10:15 PM
my newest wall its a angel diary wallpaper i made from a scan i found online...comments/suggestions always welcomed

LittleMomo
01-24-2006, 10:19 PM
That's sooooooo cute! soooo romantic! Keep it up!


Daisuke

MistressPookyChan
01-25-2006, 02:24 AM
The character is a bit too washed out. I would bring out some more details in the drawing. For a good image editor, try Neat Image. It's freeware.

LavaBug
01-25-2006, 07:15 AM
itīs way too blurry and for my taste itīs too bright
(not only because of the white but also because the
color of the chara and bg contrast very much, which makes it disturbing)
for the font, you could try some handwriting style or something

Midnight's Twilight
01-25-2006, 08:12 AM
Hey, thats really good, so much better than what I can do anyways,
the background is pretty, it fits with the character but its kinda blurry.
Hope to see more ^___^

Theodore
01-25-2006, 03:50 PM
Cool that is good I think. So don't stop ok.
"Holla! Holla! Holla!"
(pm me have fun)

Foxxer
02-09-2006, 10:07 AM
Contrast and saturation are way too high on the character; her colors are bleeding. Also, she's not sharp enough, especially when compared with the sharp detail on the background. It looks like the background is in focus, but she isn't.

I don't think the background's light blue color works, because that color doesn't appear anywhere in the character. Perhaps a light purple, similar to the one in the lollipop?

The font is dull. Papyrus is used everywhere. Do something interesting with the text - tilt it, smudge it, anything to make it less bland. Also, the kerning in 'Yo' and 'Pr' is terrible; you may have to adjust that by hand.