Why?

[BlackDragon15]

I wrote this a while ago. I hope it's alright.






Why?



I thought you loved me
but you say you don't
You said you would give me the world just to see me smile
but now you say you won't
What is this pain in my heart
Why am I running from you when all I want to do is hold you
Why am I crying now
Why haven't you come back for me and tell me it alright like all the times before
I cried myself to sleep and dream of your kiss
When I woke your telling me its aright now
Was it just a nightmare
Or is this just a dream

[yami hatake]

You write poems?o0...wow..it was good.Sad but good.-yami

[Sakura Holic]

Its a nice poem. Keep up the good work.

[BlackDragon15]

Thanks everyone


You write poems?o0...wow..it was good.Sad but good.-yamiuh yeah. I never really told anyone at school cause I never thought they were that good :sweatdrop I'm happy some people like them:happy:

[LittleMomo]

So deep for a poem. Anyway, ^_^ it's good and I hope that you make another one because I'm starting to enjoy your poems. Keep it up!

[Hinata Hyuuga]

What a wonderful poem! I hope to see more of your poems soon!

[abercobie]

i ike it i meen it is good keep it up *claps*

[BlackDragon15]

Wow I didn't think this many people would like ithttp://animegalleries.net/bbs/images/smilies/confused.gif to tell you the truth I didn't think anyone would like it at allhttp://animegalleries.net/bbs/images/smilies/sweatdrop.gif whilehttp://animegalleries.net/bbs/images/smilies/thanks.gif I got two other ones on here somewhere but I think you might have to find them cause I don't think no one got to really read them. I'll post another one of my old ones later. It's alittle like this one so you guys might like it.http://animegalleries.net/bbs/images/smilies/happy.gif

[NappaMan]

Very nice poem. I'd love to hear more.
I agree. If the rest are that good then SHARE!!!

[BlackDragon15]

NappaMan, thanks and I actually have three other ones called Broken, Lift Behind, and Dying Heart. Like I said before you might have to look a little bit for the first two^_^; Well I hope you like them like you liked this one^.^

[anime_boy]

its a very good poem keep up the good work

[BlackDragon15]

Thank you^o^

[yami hatake]

It's a good poem..can't wait to see another!!-yami

[BlackDragon15]

It's a good poem..can't wait to see another!!-yamiI don't know if anyone would like the others^^;

[Fibanacci]

It's a really good poem BlackDragon15. Keep up the good work.

[Fetal Fetish]

Nice poem. Keep up the good work.

[BlackDragon15]

wow cool poem you should go to poem-and-quotes.com thats a great place to post that believe me i do it too:)Thanks and I'll go right now:computer:

[chii-fan-lover]

wow....thats deep, but i like it. good work. hope to see more soon.

[BlackDragon15]

wow....thats deep, but i like it. good work. hope to see more soon.your the second person to say that. All my poems are like that, I guess. I'm going to try and come up with another one soon. Hopefully it will be as good as this one.

[Astalle]

Nice poem ^.^ keep up the good work.

[chii-fan-lover]

your the second person to say that. All my poems are like that, I guess. I'm going to try and come up with another one soon. Hopefully it will be as good as this one.is that a bad thing that im the second person to say that? oh well.....? yay more poems.and i'm sure it'll be good.

[BlackDragon15]

is that a bad thing that im the second person to say that? oh well.....? yay more poems.and i'm sure it'll be good.no it's a good thing. Its just I never thought anyone would think my poem was deep.


Nice poem ^.^ keep up the good work.Thank you:D

[Sasuke is God]

that was incrediable!!! had 2 read one of your poems!!!

[Aminity]

I think it's skillfully written. :)
I got a feeling of sadness when I read it.

[BlackDragon15]

Wow, people are still reading my poem:eek: Thanks guys^_^
SiG, how did you even know I had any poems on here?^^'

[BlackDragon15]

that was such a cool poem!Thanks, happy that you liked it:D I still can't believe people are reading it. It feels like such a long time ago that I post it.