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Faceless111
01-04-2006, 04:13 PM
The Hate System

It's stuck in a circle,
like a merry-go-round.
Turn the blue marks, make them purple.
Stick it to the mud, stick it in the ground.

I'll count your thoughts relevant
Only if such thoughts of hate are thoughts sent.
I'm politically incorrect.
In the social latter, I'm a step below an insect.

So let's parasite
Suck on a paradise
And grip it tight
So become rodents lower to mice.

Feel dispair.
Go ahead and share.
Feel anger.
Pull it to and shove it to danger.
Feel depression.
Mold and scold it into succession.

Love the Hate System.
It answers all.
Drinks blood through the stem.
It will not fall.

Learn all the knowledge,
Teacher of terror,
And all the fears are taking you over.
Another victim of Hate.

Just because they're different,
they are those you hate,
vibes rent, returned, and sent,
they are victims of hate.

The Hate System,
Please, children, learn to hate.
The Hate System,
Learn like your parents how to hate.

Murderer, Holy Father,
Where are you now?

Rip apart, torn asunder.
Be fright, be the thunder.

The Hate Systems owns you.
You, you, and you too.

Sana
01-04-2006, 04:14 PM
wow long but very good its a cool poem better than the ones I make O_o; Pm if you want to.

shougo amakousa
03-22-2006, 08:39 AM
its more like a song but it is really good^.^

Sana Kurata
06-27-2006, 06:49 PM
Wow..its very nice..and when you think about it very true..Better than any poem i could ever write

Aleyna
06-27-2006, 11:45 PM
ohhh im so giving u reps for this faceless!!!

1 of the most creative poems ive read in a very very long time!!!! :D

Faceless111
06-28-2006, 12:49 AM
Wow. This is an older poem of mine, how was this thread revived? Anyways, thanks for the feedback.

viewtyjoe
06-28-2006, 01:46 AM
People like to dig, what can you say? As for opinions on the poem, yay for originality in format. If I have to read one more rhyming poem I might have to perform the ancient rite of seppuku.