....mind over matter...

[broken_bleeding_angel]

this ones about death....so like, yea.....

The voices in my head,
Make me wish that I was dead.
They scream, they rant. they rave, they shout,
But I have no idea , what it's all about.
They say they are my friend,
That they'll be there till the end.
I can't stay here anymore,
They say i'm such a bore.
My eyes, they start bauling,
As I feel like I am falling.
For I am but, only one,
To her death, she shall sucumb....

[Wandering Samurai]

I like it*kiss* you're alot better then me. keep it up

[LittleMomo]

Your poems are beyond good! Keep it up and hope to see another poem. ^_^

[broken_bleeding_angel]

lol thx u both. i appreciate it. *kisses Samurai back* ur both great poets.

[Kitanoru]

Wow, magnificent!! I loved the poem, "broken bleeding angel". I too love to write poems.. it's always so nice to express emotions on paper in a creative way ^^

[Yukari]

Very good poem. The tiltle reminds of a book I read twilight but I loved the poem keep up the good work

[broken_bleeding_angel]

thank you and it is a grwat way aslong as you have the inspiration to write it, right?

[Daenerys]

I really, really didn't like it. All the rhyme's seemed forced and overused. It's like I read the poem already before I finished reading it.