View Full Version : Naruto Fanfiction: Once upon a xmas day (Chp. 1)

~Troublesome Woman~
12-21-2005, 10:38 PM
DISCLAIMER: Right, I so own Naruto. No. seriously, I do. Haha, just kidding. Naruto is the property of Masashi Kishimoto, and seeing as I'm not him, I don't own it (woah, how deep).



Chapter one - The date.

Neji had always thought of Tenten as his. He knew he shouldn't, but he
couldn't help it. They trained together every day. More to the point,
he ASKED her to train with him every day. In his mind, that was
dating. He'd even shown her his blind spot - hell, that was almost
a confession of love. She was always with him. He knew that in all the
world, she was the only person who understood him. And even though he
never showed it, he appreciated everything she did for him.

In short, to him, they where almost boyfriend and girlfriend.

So when Tenten told him she couldn't train with him on xmas eve
because she was going on a date with Aburame Shino, at first he
thought he had misheard.


"I said I can't, Neji. I have to meet Shino at the movies in an hour."

Neji couldn't believe it. What the hell was going on? His insides
seemed to have dissapeard. He felt anger burning in the pit of his
stomach. He wanted to scream.

"That's fine Tenten. I'll see you tomorrow." he said, his face and
voice emotionless. Tenten looked a little suprised.

"Thanks for understanding!" she said, and walked off. Neji watched her

Arburame Shino? What the hell? That BUG-FREAK?!

He couldn't take it. It was too much. He sunk his fist into the snow
covered tree next to him, his mind on fire. He'd KILL that freakin' loser!
No, his inner self thought, you won't. He asked her, and you never
did. You just took it for granted that she was happy with you.

He felt his insides writhe in misery. How could he have been so
stupid? Now she was going with that loser, that bug-crazy idiot,
that stupid little sunglassed-freak? No. This would NOT do. It would not do
at all.


Tenten walked into the theatre, feeling more than a little
dissapointed. Neji didn't care at all. He didn't care that she was
going on a date with Shino.

Shino. Sure, he was alright, but she didn't really like
him. He was strong, mysterious, but he was a little too weird to be
her type.

She had only said yes because he'd asked her. No, that was
wrong. She'd said yes because she wanted to see how Neji would react
when she told him. Well, she'd told him. He didn't care at all.

She had really hoped that Neji would object. This was NOT how she
wanted to spend xmas eve, walking around, looking for bugs with
Shino. She would much rather train with Neji.

Oh, what have I gotten myself into?

She saw Shino over at the ticket booth. He waved her over. She
sighed, and went to meet him.

"Hi Shino." she said, trying to sound enthusiastic. He just nodded.

God, she thought, this is going to be a hard day.


Neji walked quickly down the snow covered streets. Where the hell was
this place again?
Suddenly he saw it. He slid through the doors in an instant, and was
standing in the foyer of the Konoha cinema.

He looked around. He couldn't see Tenten anywhere, or the bug-freak,
for that matter.

Damn it! he thought, annoyed. They must have already gone in.

He walked up to the ticket booth.

"Exuse me, what is showing at the moment?" he asked the lady at the

"Well, there's "Come come Violence the movie","

No, Neji thought to himself.

""Chicken Little","


""King Kong"."


""Bugs in the Amazon","

That's the ticket.

"Could I please have a ticket for "Bugs in the Amazon"?"

"Of course." she handed him the ticket and he paid her. Then he walked
swiftly into cinema five.

It was dark.


He looked around and found Tenten almost immidiatley, sitting right up
the back with Shino. He smirked.

He walked up the stairs until he reached their row, then slid along
and sat down beside Tenten, with Shino on her other side.

"N-Neji!" she said, looking at him with wide eyes.

"Oh, hello Tenten, Shino. I didn't realise you where here." he said in
a falsely suprised voice. Neither of them bought it.

"Beat it Hyuuga, I'm on a date here." said Shino, annoyed.

Neji looked offended. "Oh, but I wouldn't want to miss this!" he said,
gesturing towards the screen.

"Fine." said Shino, standing up. "Let's go Tenten."

Tenten looked at Neji for a moment, and as she looked at him their
eyes met. She stared into those expressionless orbs for a long moment,
losing herself in their depths.

Shino tugged on her hand. "Let's go."

She got up reluctantly. So did Neji.

"On second thoughts, I don't feel like watching this." he said.

"Fine." said Shino, and sat back down. Tenten looked annoyed.

"Make up your mind!" she said, pouting as she sat back down.

Neji also sat down.

"Oh, well, I've already paid, so I guess I'd better watch this after

Like HELL he was going to let Shino sit alone with Tenten at the back
of the cinema.

Shino turned on him with cold fury. Then he got up. He grabbed
Tenten's hand and dragged her out of the cinema. Neji followed,


Yeah, first chapter! So, waddaya think? Don't worry, it should get more interesting later on (oh yeah!), but please give me your opinions!

neji_shikamura_ lova_ 231
03-22-2006, 05:12 AM
Funny.... Shino and Tenten really don't match though still it was good!

~Troublesome Woman~
03-22-2006, 07:28 PM
Funny.... Shino and Tenten really don't match though still it was good!

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR COMMENTING! I LOVE this fanfic, but I haven't really... well, continued because no one ever said they liked it or hated it or anything! Maybe I'll do the second chapter! *will rep as soon as possible*

konoha kate
03-22-2006, 08:11 PM
I liked it KBK! I was laughing at some parts, it's so funny their hidden emotions, and Neji following her to the movies. ^^ Are you going to write a second chapter?

neji_shikamura_ lova_ 231
03-23-2006, 01:14 AM
Poor Tenten must be dizzy...... Up down up down ..... get the point

~Troublesome Woman~
03-23-2006, 03:08 AM
Lol... I may well write a second chapter. I'm not sure... working on the Gaara preface at the mo'....

06-04-2006, 02:56 PM
aaaah you MUST write a second chapter !!! it's good it really is ,, it was so funny wit the up nd down :p lol

fox demon naruto
06-04-2006, 06:07 PM
I hate neji so i would like to see him suffer. But it was good.

Fei Ling
06-05-2006, 01:24 AM
It was a nice fanfic TW!
Shino and Tenten? Weird paring.....but a very great Fanfic!

06-26-2006, 12:57 PM
u didnt pm me TT_TT

anyways its so good.

face it neji!! hyaahahahahaha!!

waiting also for next chp