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nutcase
11-23-2005, 10:13 AM
Hey can you rate my first wallpaper.. finally got around and did something =x lol..

Raven
11-23-2005, 11:35 AM
Eh, we don't really "rate" here, but I do have some constructive criticism, ready?

It's rather boring, the colors aren't bad, but there's just nothing going on. The images are blurry, and there looks like some extraction issues on the left one's shoulder, very jaggedy. The pink bars are ok, but what's with the text on top?

You're off to a decent start. To improve, you can take one image, or do both, but make sure you have a central focus, and make the background more exciting. Add dimension to it, brushes, clouds, whatever. But I would say remove the text, some of the blur, and the pink bars.

Good job and good luck

nutcase
11-23-2005, 12:41 PM
Heh thx, when i say rate i mean give views etc. =x Believe it or not, ive been somewhere here for a long time >_<

ChibiChibi
11-23-2005, 09:24 PM
The colors are very bright and I must ask you, which character are you trying to be noticed first. Which ever one you say, you should try and add the focus onto them. Otherwise, it's pretty good for a first wallpaper.

nutcase
11-24-2005, 04:01 AM
Here are some clouds for the time bein...redid the extraction..Going back to the wordings and focus now.. thx alot