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kougas_gal_forlife
11-08-2005, 11:47 AM
Ok, i wrote this poem, and its KINDA in song form, not rhyming tho... but i can sing it... ok here it is

I'm about to reach the end
I'm falling now and have been for a while

(Chorus) Right now, Right now
I see the end, I see the end
Catch me, Catch me
or it'll all be over, all be over

I need you now
more than ever
I need someone
To love me
To hold me
To catch me

(Chorus x2)

I see the blood,
my own blood
that's the only thing that makes me smile anymore
to see my blood dripping from that razor
I just want it to be over, over

Oh oh oh
I need you now more than ever
I need you to, to, to
to love me,
to hold me,
to catch me

(chorus)

I need you,
I need you,
To catch me

Kewii
11-08-2005, 11:50 AM
Poems belong in fanfiction. I would just move this, but Princess Ai has specific rules for formatting posts in fanfiction. So, go check out the rules, and post there.

Closed.