Keitaru-san
08-31-2005, 09:45 PM
hey i was had this great story well start like most of the others but when you get in to it you see its diffrent.
its about a man who hold great power (magic and martial art) he dont remember his past, his name, his age and his abbility, so lets start:
chapter one: the awakening!
Year 2245 A.D, location 23 million years from earth in spaceship called GREEN GUARDIAN, a cylinder has been recovered by the olive team(one of the top four excavate teams of the GREEN GUARDIAN also the GALAXY MOLES) the team member are captain Dwayne Kennedy, Jina George(aka eagle eye "due to her sharp visual senses"), Tim Klrak(also known as timy the clown because of his love for clowns??) and the last mamber Kentaru Mishizaru(he is a swordmaster and he is a descendent of a legendary samurai Yojimbo), the cylinder was found in a mountain temple. In the recovery chamber, evryone gathered around the cylinder, the dust has been cleaned and the age of cylinder is uknown although the temple ruin were centuries old but the cylinder seems new, there is a word hacked on the front of the cylinder "The most powerful evil..... is resting in here, locked ...... away by holy magic, who break the seal will bring c...... to the world and .....hunter will be released to fight the .......................... .
Year 11.. ."
ok now the .... means its means the word was ruined while they were digging the cylinder out. so what do you think should i continue this story or not?(well not in the forum though i just put a summerised version and that is if you want me to continue)
its about a man who hold great power (magic and martial art) he dont remember his past, his name, his age and his abbility, so lets start:
chapter one: the awakening!
Year 2245 A.D, location 23 million years from earth in spaceship called GREEN GUARDIAN, a cylinder has been recovered by the olive team(one of the top four excavate teams of the GREEN GUARDIAN also the GALAXY MOLES) the team member are captain Dwayne Kennedy, Jina George(aka eagle eye "due to her sharp visual senses"), Tim Klrak(also known as timy the clown because of his love for clowns??) and the last mamber Kentaru Mishizaru(he is a swordmaster and he is a descendent of a legendary samurai Yojimbo), the cylinder was found in a mountain temple. In the recovery chamber, evryone gathered around the cylinder, the dust has been cleaned and the age of cylinder is uknown although the temple ruin were centuries old but the cylinder seems new, there is a word hacked on the front of the cylinder "The most powerful evil..... is resting in here, locked ...... away by holy magic, who break the seal will bring c...... to the world and .....hunter will be released to fight the .......................... .
Year 11.. ."
ok now the .... means its means the word was ruined while they were digging the cylinder out. so what do you think should i continue this story or not?(well not in the forum though i just put a summerised version and that is if you want me to continue)