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DominoEffect
08-28-2005, 03:13 AM
My first wallpaper, please give feedback.
http://x2.putfile.com/8/23903111976.jpg

jhjmonnee
08-28-2005, 04:34 AM
Welcome to the forums. It looks pretty good but I think you could do something with the white spaces because they make it look more plain than it should be. The colour of the font should be different as well. Other than that it looks great.

MistressPookyChan
08-28-2005, 07:42 AM
read the forum rules before posting again. Wallpapers should be uploaded onto the post via the "manage uploads" function. Please do it or I will delete your wallpaper. Thanks!

Kukuriyu
08-28-2005, 09:18 AM
I think that this wallpaper has too much contrast. The colors are a very important aspect of any cg. This wallaper also has too much negative space.
... And one last thing- The two fayes can distract the viewer so i suggets you give the "minor" Faye some distinct color that will allow the other Faye to "brighten" up.
Sorry if you don't understand what i'm sayin'..*sign*

-Shizu-
08-28-2005, 09:20 AM
its nice :) anyway welcome to the AF :D

DominoEffect
08-28-2005, 07:22 PM
Mistress-I'm not sure what you mean, I don't usually go to forums like this. Could you explain what I have to do and I'll do it as soon as I can?

MistressPookyChan
08-28-2005, 09:40 PM
edit your post. Go to "manage attachments". Upload the image and click "ok". That should be it. If you have any questions, just ask.