View Full Version : New Manga!!!

08-08-2005, 05:22 PM
Today I started a new manga. Itīll combine comedy,love, action...
This is the first page...I donīt have the title,but Iīll think about it.

08-08-2005, 05:52 PM
thats really good

08-08-2005, 06:07 PM
could be better but koo

08-08-2005, 07:27 PM
It's very cool.I like it.If you get it published I'll defenetly read it.

Mira Kaiba
08-08-2005, 11:03 PM
i like it. Looks really good.

08-09-2005, 07:25 AM
The idea is not bad.

However, it is the best to correct a lot of places that are and to solve a
uncomplete place by my idea.

08-09-2005, 03:03 PM
Okay, the only error I could see is that it kinda looks like that guy's body is facing one way, and his head the other. But other than that, that's awsome. I like the words and the art. Good job!

08-09-2005, 03:27 PM
It's good nothing special but nothing bad either.

wave master
08-09-2005, 03:30 PM
not bad!!:D i like it:) i hope you get it published:D :cool:

08-09-2005, 03:40 PM
it needs work but its good that youve set high goals and are going to achieve them one way or another =)

08-09-2005, 04:23 PM
It's cool!! I like it. ^^

08-09-2005, 04:35 PM
to tell the truth I think the story wonīt come out... specially Iīm better drawing shonen and all those action scenes...maybe Iīll think about it...Well , know iīm working with page two.

Naroku Inc.
08-09-2005, 07:11 PM
looks good.

Naroku Inc.
08-09-2005, 07:32 PM
i need to grow plz let me grow and plz increase my repution:) :laugh: :laugh: :laugh:
Dude...stop doing this. If you want to beg then make your own thread instead of spamming in someone else's. We don't like this. Please stop and just earn your reputation like a normal person.

08-09-2005, 11:46 PM
it good... but you can still improve it... i hope you do...

Naroku Inc.
08-10-2005, 02:02 PM
Yes, jsut a few anatomy things you could improve on. If you need any help PM me...i like helping with anatomy and critiquiing.

Mutsumi Anami
08-10-2005, 06:05 PM
Hey cool manga bro...hope it goes all well!!! I like the girl she's cute hehe ^_ ^!!!
Keep up the good work!