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Raven_Momiji
08-08-2005, 03:42 PM
This is the pain
I cannot hide
You see right through
To the other side

I've lost my mind
Just trying to live
Makes no since
When I'm trying to kill

Seems a shame
My pain is ever true
And now I am thinking
It got the best of you

See this crimson glass
I've seen right through
Gazing into your soul
Seeking out your ever true

Hiding in my soul
Forgetting my fear
Just so you will never
See this blessed tear

animeglobe
08-08-2005, 03:45 PM
thas a good poem. its really touching. keep writing. your really good

Raven_Momiji
08-08-2005, 03:47 PM
Thanks bunches

DarkPrinceBman
08-08-2005, 04:05 PM
Very nice....its very powerful, im glad you are still here to write

Raven_Momiji
08-08-2005, 06:04 PM
thanks... but i dont really particularly happy for the inspiration

umi-chan
08-09-2005, 12:45 AM
i like the depth of it

Raven_Momiji
08-09-2005, 08:04 PM
thanks... was surprisingly not hard to write... but then none are for me

Uchiha Ulquiorra
08-09-2005, 09:21 PM
I Like it. it is a very good poem

Marie2007
08-09-2005, 09:26 PM
wow it is really good

Raven_Momiji
08-09-2005, 09:52 PM
Thank you both... it means alot to me that you would take time out to read my work..

Dean haragatsu
08-10-2005, 01:35 AM
this is great i mean spectacular give it two thumbs up

iMud
09-09-2006, 08:05 AM
really good poem and very enchanting lol