View Full Version : Soyokaze

08-02-2005, 07:56 PM
If anyone remembers a couple(maybe it was more) weeks back when I posted that character outline I was working on, well here it is. The finished CG and wallpaper. Took quite a while, but I think it turned out pretty well. I tried to randomize the sakura petals but it didn't turn out exactly how I wanted it. Any things that you guys think need to be worked one/changed on the wall?

And yes the background is slightly blurry, I wanted it that way.
Now that I look at it again, I'm definitely gonna re-work the sakura petals.

08-02-2005, 10:36 PM
This wallpaper is quite... "beautiful". I do remember the lineart... and it is i've got to say that it takes talent to do something like this.:laugh:

Xian Pu
08-03-2005, 12:08 AM
She needs knees. Try either shadowing that or adding a line or two to emphasize them. Other than that... wow. What a transformation. Beautiful work all around.

08-03-2005, 02:49 PM
Ooh, pretty. The petals need work. They could use..is perspective the right word? You know, make some bigger, some blurry in the background. They all look like they are in the foreground. It turned out really good!

08-03-2005, 09:01 PM
it is quite good, espicially the background.

08-05-2005, 02:16 PM
The work is pretty good except there's something wrong with the looks of her skirt..it's a skirt with pleats so while the wind is blowing it on the right side that one part isn't flowing the right way not sure if that made sense but if you look at it again something doesn't look right (maybe try wearing one and get someone to take a picture of the way it should move but in real life you would need a day with strong gusts of wind) ...I think to fix that is to go back to the beginning and re-draw but I don't think you want to do that now.

08-07-2005, 07:35 PM
Well I tried adding knees but it just turned out looking horribly wrong everytime I tried lol. And you're right esca, I'm not totally sure what you mean, and going back to redraw would be quite tough now. Anyways, I reworked the petals, hope they look better now.

The Wing Man
08-07-2005, 10:16 PM
I like it alot.

08-08-2005, 08:57 AM
I like the changes you made to the petals. If you cant draw knees, how about not include them? Enlarge the image a bit, and slide her down so her knees don't show!

08-08-2005, 07:25 PM
It looks very nice.The petals ned work but other then that very nice.

08-08-2005, 08:04 PM
Lol, geez Pooky, why didn't I think of that XD, anyways you guys decide which one's better :) This one or the last one, up to you ^_^

08-09-2005, 12:06 AM
I like the last one better, but I also like larger characters.

08-09-2005, 07:36 AM
The last one is better. ^^

08-09-2005, 11:14 AM

the last one ^_^

08-09-2005, 12:27 PM
Yup, definately the last one. Good job on the petals, they look much better.