Original Fiction: The Liar and The Thief

[Daenerys]

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[Ami~chan]

Excellent; I personally am fasinated by tales and stories of Jack the Ripper, so reading a short story on the subject was enjoyable. Keep up the excellant work; the last paragraph was my favorite, however.

[Daenerys]

I think the ending was rushed myself.. but thank you!

I might re-write it when I have more time. I'm actually on my mom's computer, so my creativity was stifiled. There's so much more I wanted to portray.

[pyrothunder336]

i was a great story plot and Jack the Ripper was a good charcter with a good classic sounding name

[Daenerys]

Oh.. but was that Jack the Ripper, or just some guy?

[helba]

good story

[Ami~chan]

Hrmm... I thought that the guy was Jack the Ripper, in the end. Maybe he wasn't; the ending was sorta a cliffhanger, but it's good.

[Marie2007]

it is a very good short story the plot is good as well

[Daenerys]

I forgot I wrote this. Aint half bad either. --hoping for more comments--