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Daenerys
07-08-2005, 08:40 PM
Yo', yo'.
Yo', check 'dis.

Mike check, one... one two.



Yo' you be sayin' a lot of crunk,
Sayin' I moderate with the stylea funk.
But homie you aint got no love,
That's why you got them package of unwrapped gloves.

Foo you got da nerve,
Be actin' a foo and givin' me crap I dun deserve.
I aint gotta stoop so low,
Cos that's a low I just cant go.

You spit out some nonesense as fast as your fingers can go,
And homie you got no skill, no real flow.
Wouldn't waste my rhymes the way that you do,
I swear I just saw yo' dad in a Tutu.

Especially when messin' with caps,
I'll make you collapse.
Cos you so stunned you cannot react
Cus foo, I got da skills you lack.


Yo, yo.. mike check.


OC LOC STRIKES AGAIN, She be da illst rappa eva ta grace these sites yo.

Naokomi ShYana
07-08-2005, 08:44 PM
Omg so good. My signature and this rap are like sista's yo'. I love it. <3

Ami~chan
07-08-2005, 08:45 PM
Absolutely wonderful. XD 10/10 more certainly. And isn't it so true?

Daenerys
07-08-2005, 08:46 PM
=D Wow, I never thought me rapping would get such a great response.

I shall rap more from now on.

Mugetsu
07-08-2005, 09:14 PM
That was, uh....um...interesting. Great effort.

Daenerys
07-08-2005, 09:27 PM
There wasn't really any effort involved, I'm just naturally that talented.

Mugetsu
07-08-2005, 09:30 PM
If I had a record label I would sign you.

Daenerys
07-08-2005, 09:39 PM
;_; That's the nicest thing anyone's ever said to me...

I shall rap about you after I rap about my D-Ego, and my T-Mec.

Rap about the homie who wanted to give me a chance.

Nineteenth
07-08-2005, 09:42 PM
Come to New York, there's a good chance you would get signed instantly.

That rap is the bomb diggity, that puts the shizzle in my overdosed nizzle and since your my homeslice with the double dose side of rice.. You, totally own.

Better rapper than I could ever be, also. I like it alot.

Mugetsu
07-08-2005, 09:43 PM
The more I see this the more I like it. Especially this part. I can imagine spitin this to a Kanye West beat.



You spit out some nonesense as fast as your fingers can go,
And homie you got no skill, no real flow.
Wouldn't waste my rhymes the way that you do,
I swear I just saw yo' dad in a Tutu.

Especially when messin' with caps,
I'll make you collapse.
Cos you so stunned you cannot react
Cus foo, I got da skills you lack.

Daenerys
07-08-2005, 09:51 PM
Actually, the caps part I paraphrased from this guy who cussed out one of the mods. But I claim it as my own, because I own.


I believe the TuTu line is my best.

Mugetsu
07-08-2005, 09:56 PM
Yes, the Tutu line was pure brilliance. I'm more Hip Hop/R&B myself but after this I may have to listen to more rap.

Daenerys
07-08-2005, 09:59 PM
...I don't listen to rap. Unless of course you call Eminem rap. I listen to him. I'm more of a punx roxor myself. Pretty damn good for a kid who screams out the lyrics they write.

Mugetsu
07-08-2005, 10:11 PM
Eminem is definitely rap. Sceaming out the lyrics is half the fun, it's good exercise too.

Daenerys
07-08-2005, 10:17 PM
Yeah, you're throat's really sore.

Man for some reason, my rhymes aren't flowing as pure as they were an hour ago.

Mugetsu
07-08-2005, 10:25 PM
Don't worry, all great artists go through small droughts. It'll start flowin again soon.

BrittyBott
07-08-2005, 10:31 PM
That was excellent. The TuTu part...brilliance.

Marie2007
07-29-2005, 07:33 PM
very impressive Ai

Daenerys
07-30-2005, 12:26 AM
=D thank you all for your comments. You encourage me to be a great rapper.

stigmatize
07-30-2005, 12:36 AM
Though it's not my cup of tea, you're definitely on your way to become a great rapper.

That tutu line was brilliant. XD

Daenerys
07-23-2006, 09:36 PM
I'm going to rap more. I promise.

Capo
07-23-2006, 09:40 PM
Everyone wants to follow Ai's rise to Rap greatness. You could be a star!

Oh how the A-list celeberty dudes will flock to you.

=3

-!Capo!-