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VARLY
06-02-2005, 10:59 AM
Really, thanx to my lovely imouto, Runa Kawaii, that this artwork can arrive here….

This artwork[s] r actually b’day present for her; but I dun hv scanner n I got no copy left here… I did take the pic with digicam, but the result’s unsatisfying…

That’s why, Runa, arigatou ^^ I really mean it, because u scan them n ‘bring’ them around on the line, I can get it again ^^ [bravo!]

Anyway please rate them! Any comment, critize, or whatever r welcome here ^^


http://www.animeforum.com/uploads/55c5ee0b.jpg

http://www.animeforum.com/uploads/KurapicaandKilluabyonne-chan.jpg

Taikyo
06-02-2005, 11:43 AM
*cries* it..its soo beautiful VARLY. ^^ And i see nothing wrong with it. So keep up the good work. =D

VARLY
06-02-2005, 11:58 AM
Thanx Taikyo ^^
but i need some comment for income ^^ hehe

Mayonnaise
06-02-2005, 10:24 PM
Wow. I really liked how you colored the pictures!
And the artwork is fantastic. ^ ^

VARLY
06-03-2005, 09:25 AM
thanx ^^ but where's the comment & critics??

Ωmega
06-03-2005, 10:04 AM
so far,i think i like your work the best.my only comment is...they all look like demons.but cute demons!

VARLY
06-03-2005, 10:27 AM
again, thanx ^^..... (demon, eh?)
critics r needed for improvement.... so don't hesitate to post any ok ^^

tiv
06-03-2005, 10:39 AM
okay...okay, things to improve on, eh? lessee....

well, the fingers on the drawing with the girl/woman in the kimono look a little off, like...sausage like? though not really...i'm not sure how to describe them. but fingers are a hard thing to draw in the first place and you can really only improve with most things with more practice--i.e. draw more.

the face on the blue haired man looks off, like...the nose looks in the wrong place. perhaps you're showing too much of the other side of the face and that other eye.

i'd say work on face proportions and drawing hands. also, i'd like to see you drawing the whole form and pushing your shading a little more some really nice darks and some really nice lights.

however, i love the soft tone of your pictures, and if you want to keep that you don't have to push your contrasts...that was one of my major problems--i liked to make things look too soft and my teacher kept wanting me to push myself to have darker shading and brighter lights--more contrast.

i like how you do the hair, that looks wonderful and i like the texture in the pictures as well--the paper you probably use. the girl's face i really like, especially her eyes. i also like the backgrounds--the flowers. so just a few small things to try to work on. keep up the good work.

VARLY
06-03-2005, 12:04 PM
Thanx.... ^^ i will keep those as notes *are there more??*
actually it is paper used as invitation cards.... my dad bought them for sumthin else, n my idea come up to use sum different media for my drawing [i used to use HVS - printer paper; well i think different paper media suit better for different drawing media ^^ i hv to try n experiment things out to know exactly how it works hehe]

The Rebel
06-03-2005, 02:01 PM
Ok. I think they are excellent. But the characters themselves, seem child like. As if you were drawing little kids. That's the best I can do. Don't see where you need much improvement.

Faroelove
06-03-2005, 03:36 PM
your work is soooooooooooooooooooooooo cute! I love it!

LizaLiza
06-03-2005, 05:17 PM
Yeah, some of the things that Tiv said are true. But just practice practice and you will do well! I'm also an artist. But I need to practice more; my drawings look kinda bad. o.o; I LOVE how you shade, Varly, it looks so nice! n_n

tiv
06-04-2005, 09:23 AM
Yeah, some of the things that Tiv said are true. But just practice practice and you will do well! I'm also an artist. But I need to practice more; my drawings look kinda bad. o.o; I LOVE how you shade, Varly, it looks so nice! n_n
yeah, i really liked the art work so i was sort of digging for things that might need imporvement..<_<;..it's harder to find things to improve on if you really like how the art looks...

Kinomoto,Sakura
06-04-2005, 09:54 AM
There cute!I love the way these were drawn!^__^

Priest The Holy
06-04-2005, 09:57 AM
i totaly like the drawings i think they look awsome keep drawimg and u could have your own t.v. show

hao~asakura
06-04-2005, 10:16 AM
i like them.. and usually i dont like pictures that are colured in... i would love to put mine up but i dont have anyway of doing it.. but they are cool... the second picture im assuming they are children cos their eyes are bigger... i really like the lil flowers on the first picture..

sparkiest fox
06-04-2005, 10:58 AM
[B]Your art work is very good Varly keep it up.

Jade Lee
06-04-2005, 05:28 PM
Love the work :)

Here are my critiques:

Coloring.
Have you ever heard of flat coloring? My mentor calls it the difference between "dead" color and "alive" coloring - it's much like the difference between 2D drawing and 3D drawing.
I think that's what you need to improve on right now. Your figures are great - maybe the first one's face is a little wide, but other than that, very nicely done :).
The coloring, however, is flat - or "dead," so to speak. I see that you see contrasts between dark and light, but hair isn't just plain blue or just plain yellow. For example, if you looked at a blue jacket - what colors would you see? Not just blue. There is black, there is white, there is probably some blue-green, emerald green, maybe some patches of yellow here and there if the jacket's old, navy, aquamarine - TONS of colors. Put them all together in all the right places and you have got a living picture my friend :).

Hope this helps!

VARLY
06-04-2005, 10:04 PM
Thanx everyone ^^ of course all of them r usefull to me; i will difficult to tell which part i need to mend if no one tell me hehe

Ruhroni Khenshin
06-08-2005, 01:44 AM
hey i luv da drawing its amazing^^ well atleast better dan me lol

CuteStar
06-08-2005, 02:00 AM
Nice pictures there Varly ^_^ Those are very cute

VARLY
06-08-2005, 05:50 AM
thanx... ^^

naiume
06-08-2005, 02:09 PM
u r good but i Have seen better ,keep it up...

The Rebel
06-08-2005, 03:00 PM
do you have anymore?

VARLY
06-09-2005, 06:46 AM
do you have anymore?
actually, yes [ther're many....i drew some black n white, coal pics, water colors, oil painting, other pencil colors' works, plain ink, or just plain pencil drawings, they're tons, i've been drawing since kindergarten---- 1 o d longest activities lasting next to my piano ^^, n they've been pilling up, even they're given out to friends n others....]

BUT [i can't post them]:
i don't have a scanner [those were scanned by my sis; they're her b'day present, i just happen to get it from the web (she brings them everywhere haha maybe u ppl can see them elsewhere around other forums or some places similar), n she live far from here [hv to cross sea] i tried using digital camera, but the result's bad.....so for the time being until i luckily get to a scanner, maybe no more new drawing posted up hehe

Eva®
06-11-2005, 09:12 PM
Too bad!! ;_; *cries* I want to see more pictures because I just admire your work!! It's great!!

VARLY
06-26-2005, 01:52 AM
Too bad!! ;_; *cries* I want to see more pictures because I just admire your work!! It's great!!
thanx! ^^
but in this short time [maybe, if not this month, it should be not more then next month] i'm going to hv a drop at my sis's place, n well, i'm taking some of my drawings there n hope the scanning things works well n there'll be new pics to post up hehe ^^

Xiao_Qiao_Princess
06-26-2005, 02:22 AM
those r soooo good

Ranko_ichigo
06-27-2005, 04:43 AM
So.......that'z cool!!:cool:

Marie2007
06-27-2005, 10:55 AM
great pictures i wish i was that talented

LittleAngel
06-28-2005, 07:38 PM
I really like your pictures, especially the coloring. And the flowers and branches are amazing. :laugh: I think the faces you draw are a bit chubby, not that it's bad, it's just what I think. Your faces also seem a little bit realistic. I positively adore the hair, the clothes, and the facial features (including the eyes, nose, mouth... blah blah blah) :p .
Yours truly:cool:

VARLY
07-02-2005, 02:11 AM
thanx everyone ^^

LittleAngel
07-03-2005, 12:18 PM
No problem ^^ . By the way, what did you use to color? ('o'?)

VARLY
07-04-2005, 11:03 AM
i use pencil colour, both of them ^^
very common media, but the result's not common eh?

Saphire
07-04-2005, 05:58 PM
those are awsome.
would you mind giving me instructions on how to put drawings on animeforum?
if so pm me at Saphire.
:thanks:

.Lovebeat
07-04-2005, 06:58 PM
I'm so jelous...they're really awesome...Keep it up! :D

Nerveya
07-04-2005, 08:07 PM
O.o nice =D I like'em =D Keep it up ^^;

Marie2007
07-04-2005, 08:10 PM
great pics!

scarletbeauty
07-04-2005, 10:54 PM
ithink ur work is very beautiful

ESCAFLOWNE
07-04-2005, 11:54 PM
Your artwork is very nice^.^

飛竜
07-05-2005, 05:02 AM
Hey that is cool awesome art there VARLY. :cool:

LittleAngel
07-05-2005, 12:21 PM
i use pencil colour, both of them ^^
very common media, but the result's not common eh?
No, the result is not common. The color is too even!!! And I think the paper texture had something to do with it too.

VARLY
07-06-2005, 12:59 AM
again, thanx everybody ^^
u'r right. i think the paper texture play quite a major rule hehe

YukiSohma^-^
07-09-2005, 04:55 AM
wow, these are really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YukiSohma^-^
07-09-2005, 04:58 AM
again, thanx everybody ^^
u'r right. i think the paper texture play quite a major rule hehe

Your lucky to be able to have things like textures paper and oil paints, i love painting and drawing to, i really like your style though, but i can't critisize anything becasue i see as perfect

LittleAngel
07-10-2005, 10:44 AM
The drawings are all great. When you go over to your sister's house, please remember to scan lots of pictures ^^!!! I would like to see them so much.

MSCBrock
07-17-2005, 06:04 PM
there amazing u can draw! :)

cowboydemon666
07-17-2005, 07:26 PM
i think they're really good. better than i can draw :P

Marie2007
07-17-2005, 07:41 PM
they are amazing drawings

Kukuriyu
07-17-2005, 10:55 PM
Really impressive. You should start a manga.:D SERIOUSLY!

DepthAnime
07-24-2005, 08:55 PM
Wowww thats really very good. You have more then enough potiential to draw your own manga for sure, you draw your pictures with lots of care, and it reflects back in the finished product. keep up the good work!

VARLY
07-29-2005, 08:23 AM
thanks all of you ^^
manga... i'm doing some doujinshi now, but still not good enough to make a real manga hehe maybe i'll try sometimes...
btw, in this short time i'll post more of my art; i just scanned some more recently; take a look ok! [some r old arts, hope u ppl don't mind]

x__whitenoise
07-30-2005, 02:46 AM
oh, it's so cute, & so pretty ^__^ good job

♣Lukydemongirl♣
07-30-2005, 03:35 AM
Wow your good T.T i wish i could draw that good

VARLY
07-31-2005, 10:35 AM
thanx all of you ^^ btw the new thread for my new scanned artwork's open hehe

catskill888
09-04-2005, 05:52 PM
i really like it. it shows alot of pasion in her eyes. which is a plus to me.keep up the good work.^^

Mira Kaiba
09-07-2005, 07:04 PM
I love yur art! t is so beautiful. I love the colors too. Keep up the good work!

Demon Wolf Saber
09-21-2005, 03:32 AM
really nice pictures i liked the light colors you used