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10-27-2004, 11:11 PM
(-crosses fingers and hopes it works-)
i know, parts of it doesn't look to good in this pic. but it was a very crappy scan. so please don't blame me for the parts that aren't dark enough or the jaggedess. that was my scanner's doing.
anyway, rate it brutally. rip it to shreds so it turns into confetti for a party.

Edit: isn't it suppposed to be a thumbnail? what the heck?!


10-28-2004, 08:25 AM
OooOOOoo!SOOooOooO preetyy!0.0*stres in amazement*

10-28-2004, 08:31 AM
Wow! You did a bang up job

10-28-2004, 05:23 PM
even though u sed that ur scanner is crappy or something, it isn't
me like that pic
it's nice

10-28-2004, 08:13 PM
Oo;...looks like you copied it from a picture that already existed....

10-28-2004, 08:30 PM
there is a pic. that already exists? Oo

i don't remember copying it from a pic. though. X_x X.x

10-29-2004, 01:41 PM
well...it just LOOKS that way. maybe you're trying to hard with the shading or something? i don't know...Xx;...i know i've never actually seen another picture like that.

the shading that you're using...in the hair doesn't seem to match well.

try having the pencil marks in each shaded spot go the same dirrection ////// <--like that for example. it will unify the picture better, sort of like hatching or cross hatching if you understand my meaning.

didn't mean to offend you :/ very sorry.

Kilawher Shazarade
10-29-2004, 02:05 PM
Fantastic sketch..!!! You're a real artist.

Wish I could make something that good. ;-;

10-29-2004, 02:23 PM
i did make it go like /////.

i scanned it in the morning, not realizing it was a bad time to scan it.
then at school i fixed it up so now it looks a lot better.

i would gladly show you the improved version, but my room ate it. X_x X.x Xx;
(what?! i can't find it in my messy room! give me a break! Xx;)

that's okay tiv. you didn't offend me.

10-30-2004, 09:06 AM
i did make it go like /////.
eh...well. all right...here's what i'm saying...look at the hair, the dark part of it where the pencil lines shift from one dirrection to another toward the right part of it. that's what i'm talking about. try to keep it consistant so it does all go in one singular dirrection. if you don't like that, its fine, but at least give it a try. ^_^;

the form work is nice, the lines could use a little darkening say, around the eyes and the face. but you seem to know where to place the shadows, which is good. and the design work on the outfit is nice. you just need a few more tweakings i'd say but you do have an over all handle on things.

10-30-2004, 12:50 PM
ah, thanks for the advice. i'll work on that once i find my drawing that my room ate. Xx;

10-30-2004, 01:35 PM
Aww! Sugoi! You did a great job, especially on the dimensions and the hand/fan.

10-30-2004, 04:23 PM
Wow..it looks exactly like her.