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Daenerys
10-15-2004, 07:58 PM
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Taranee
10-31-2004, 09:04 AM
what a lovely and sad poem.......
Wolf Demon Rin
10-31-2004, 09:42 AM
i loved it very very much AI
IpleaInsanity
03-20-2005, 05:49 PM
Beautiful...it was so sad and yet gave a certain hope. Wow...*sigh* amazing!!
Daenerys
03-20-2005, 07:48 PM
--bow-- thank you, thank you. Good rep for all you guys.
8 yr old rin
04-04-2005, 08:49 PM
^^claps for Ai* very very lovely ^^
Shizuru
04-10-2005, 05:00 PM
yes Ai very lovely poem
sw33t ang3l
04-30-2005, 04:17 PM
That's awsome!
naiume
06-08-2005, 08:45 PM
i liked it id say it fits ur personality no offense...i really thought it was good.
BrittyBott
06-08-2005, 08:56 PM
That was great. Honestly, I loved it.
Ami~chan
06-08-2005, 09:06 PM
Wuffed it very much ^^

I especially loved lines 8 and 11. The way yo put it, I can imagine the scene of the poem. Makes me think of a very foggy, rainy forest. Great job on the use of imagery and the entire poem in itself.

And I swear Im not saying all this just to get rep. :P
Mugetsu
06-08-2005, 09:30 PM
The imagery was really good. I could really feel the sense of loss and desperation to find someone.
Volmar.00.Brasil
06-08-2005, 11:39 PM
On my opnium, you need to ascend in other questions. The poem is good, and answer is "baby I need you tonight"!
Daenerys
03-24-2006, 09:03 PM
LOL!

Haha, thanks for all the comments guys. Much appreciated as always!