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08-09-2004, 04:04 PM
ummm... it's been a really long time since i put any thing like a song on this forum so don't laugh k? this is my newest song i wrote so tell me if you like it.

well johny's life aint going fine, his mom don't like him and his dad's doing time, he's about to lose his mind.
well johny's school aint so great, note anough love and to much hate. he just wants to get out for hevens sake.

*coruse first line*
degenerator degenerator,
well he just crosed the line
degenerator degenerator,
well he just needs to see some kinda sighn.

well johny don't care bout felling sad, johny don't care about his dad. he just wants the life he had
well johny don't care bout hit mom, johny don't care bout his lawn. everythig is going wrong.

ummmm.. i won't put the rest cause it's long anough. so do you guys like it??

Fantasy fighter
08-09-2004, 04:05 PM
That's not bad, i give it a 7/10

08-09-2004, 04:08 PM
not bad at all. 7.6/10

08-09-2004, 11:50 PM
a seven is actually above average...lol

4=it's ok...not the best
7=pretty good (above average for the "smart" ppl)
8=niiiiiiiiiice or great
10=excellentaay!!!! lol

well...i think...lol

Digital : Deffect
08-20-2004, 12:08 PM