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Fantasy fighter
08-05-2004, 09:10 PM
What do you think of this:

Alone for a while I've been searching through the dark,
For traces of the love you left inside my lonely heart,
To weave by picking up the pieces that remain,
Melodies of life - love's lost refrain.

Our paths they did cross, though I cannot say just why.
We met, we laughed, we held on fast, and then we said goodbye.
And who'll hear the echoes of stories never told ?
Let them ring out loud till they unfold.

In my dearest memories, I see you reaching out to me.
Though you're gone, I still believe that you can call out my name.

A voice from the past, joining yours and mine.
Adding up the layers of harmony.
And so it goes, on and on.
Melodies of life,
To the sky beyond the flying birds - forever and beyond.

So far and away, see the birds as it flies by.
Gliding through the shadows of the clouds up in the sky.
I've laid my memories and dreams upon those wings.
Leave them now and see what tomorrow brings.

In your dearest memories, do you remember loving me ?
Was it fate that brought us close and now leave me behind ?

A voice from the past, joining yours and mine.
Adding up the layers of harmony.
And so it goes, on and on.
Melodies of life,
To the sky beyond the flying bird - forever and on.

If I should leave this lonely world behind,
Your voice will still remember our melody.
Now I know we'll carry on.
Melodies of life,
Come circle round and grow deep in our hearts, as long as we remember.

liltokyo
08-05-2004, 09:16 PM
SUGOI! (awesome!) lol me likey! lol

Youkai Keeper
08-05-2004, 10:15 PM
It's good!

mutsumi_yuri291
08-05-2004, 10:53 PM
That is pretty good.

____
08-06-2004, 12:47 PM
i like it a lot! ^^ any more of those poems? make more soon! ^^

mega - mano
09-15-2004, 11:38 AM
Not bad

Fantasy fighter
12-27-2004, 11:26 AM
thx to all

wizz-o-matic
12-27-2004, 05:46 PM
Oh, rather late, are you? xD Be glad that I kept this thread (duno why xD)

Fantasy fighter
12-29-2004, 03:36 PM
Lol. I've been kinda busy for the last 2 months but i'm back.

MasterFoot
12-30-2004, 05:38 PM
Seems oddly familar like ive heard it some where else....... Nah. Great poem i loved it.

Metalshadowfusi
12-31-2004, 03:25 AM
Awesome! That poem was great!

Fantasy fighter
12-31-2004, 12:31 PM
Thx. You may have seen it before since i've uploaded it to many other forums MasterFoot

Metalshadowfusi
12-31-2004, 01:05 PM
Yeah, I thought it was familiar.

cristy~
12-31-2004, 11:29 PM
yeah thats soooo toatally cool!!!!!:laugh:

Metalshadowfusi
12-31-2004, 11:31 PM
Yes, it's one of the best!

cristy~
12-31-2004, 11:33 PM
I agree all the way!!:laugh:

Fantasy fighter
01-01-2005, 08:33 AM
Thx

Metalshadowfusi
01-02-2005, 03:59 AM
I give this poem 10 out of 10, 5 stars, first place, the golden poetry award, ect.

Fantasy fighter
01-03-2005, 02:59 PM
Those 2 years of work really paid of. Everybody likes my poem.

animeseishi
01-19-2005, 04:08 AM
isnt that the lyrics of the "melodies in life' by emiko shiratori????.....

MasterFoot
01-19-2005, 09:54 PM
thats what i thought but wasn't quite sure

Fantasy fighter
01-28-2005, 06:15 PM
What r u talking about?