Haze~
12-05-2014, 09:06 AM
So I just finished translating this song, and it was SUPER hard, as far as I was concerned. I'd really appreciate any feedback on this.
Link: http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/psychopass2/fallen.htm
My translation:
"All is calm, all is bright"
Whispers the angel, not long before falling down to the ground.
I then gently devour you whole;
It's my guilty..!
As I open up my eyes,
The last thing I know,
I'm in this dim blue concrete.
Coldly,
Call my name and give me a kiss
Then take me in your embrace,
With this empty shell of a body of yours.
This life you hurled out of your throat,
Still takes on a shape of some sort.
I catch a glimpse of brilliant red eternity,
And it bursts into song right next to me.
What was I born for?
Hey, spare me some love.
'Cause I'm not letting go of you.
Hello mmmmmyyyyy name iiiiiiiisssss--
I take a sip, but it never quenches
This burning thirst inside.
These hands of mine poke fun at me,
Staining me in scarlet-red.
Before long,
I was immune to all sounds.
So I erased the sound of my breathing,
Upon the sight of your teary eyes.
Call my name and give me a kiss
Can I still bring you back,
When even the scent of blood left your body?
I crushed this peeled off glass,
And swallowed it, dripping down.
I catch a glimpse of brilliant eternity,
And it bursts into song right next to me.
What was I born for?
Hey, does that mean you'll love me?
The more it calls out to me,
I give in
To my responsive instincts.
Call my name and give me a kiss
Then take me in your embrace,
With this empty shell of a body of yours.
Love me 'till I'm nothing but fragments.
This life you hurled out of your throat,
Still takes on a shape of some sort.
I catch a glimpse of brilliant red eternity,
And it bursts into song right next to me.
What was I born for?
Hey, keep on loving me
'Till I'm satisfied.
'Till
There's nothing left of me.
Link: http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/psychopass2/fallen.htm
My translation:
"All is calm, all is bright"
Whispers the angel, not long before falling down to the ground.
I then gently devour you whole;
It's my guilty..!
As I open up my eyes,
The last thing I know,
I'm in this dim blue concrete.
Coldly,
Call my name and give me a kiss
Then take me in your embrace,
With this empty shell of a body of yours.
This life you hurled out of your throat,
Still takes on a shape of some sort.
I catch a glimpse of brilliant red eternity,
And it bursts into song right next to me.
What was I born for?
Hey, spare me some love.
'Cause I'm not letting go of you.
Hello mmmmmyyyyy name iiiiiiiisssss--
I take a sip, but it never quenches
This burning thirst inside.
These hands of mine poke fun at me,
Staining me in scarlet-red.
Before long,
I was immune to all sounds.
So I erased the sound of my breathing,
Upon the sight of your teary eyes.
Call my name and give me a kiss
Can I still bring you back,
When even the scent of blood left your body?
I crushed this peeled off glass,
And swallowed it, dripping down.
I catch a glimpse of brilliant eternity,
And it bursts into song right next to me.
What was I born for?
Hey, does that mean you'll love me?
The more it calls out to me,
I give in
To my responsive instincts.
Call my name and give me a kiss
Then take me in your embrace,
With this empty shell of a body of yours.
Love me 'till I'm nothing but fragments.
This life you hurled out of your throat,
Still takes on a shape of some sort.
I catch a glimpse of brilliant red eternity,
And it bursts into song right next to me.
What was I born for?
Hey, keep on loving me
'Till I'm satisfied.
'Till
There's nothing left of me.