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tdm17mn
06-21-2014, 01:33 AM
Trip- Innocent of D:

Intersecting lines meet in the distance as the sky calls out.
A trembling voice dances underneath the cross.
Because you won't show your weakness, accept the wind, shake it off and move forward.
Release your impulses.
Run and gather your will.
I will not forget those eyes.
Memories sway, Draw×Delete. Tomorrow will replace the present.
Still, the light of reincarnation gently touches my rouge cheeks.

Smiling mischievously, Mary’s white thorns conceal her many scars.
Even if you grasp just a little of your dream, protect it until the end with a strong, divine protection.
Worried about the end of the world, a beat quickens, joined together by a pure desire to live.
Because your wet tears draw an arc of hope...
Still, the light of reincarnation will surely not replace this name.
An uncertain eternity and a piled up wish— these returning feelings softly touch my chest.
Release your impulses.
Run and gather your will.
I will not forget those eyes.
Memories sway, Draw×Delete. Fight against the light.
Now, a commencing battle gently touches my rogue chest.

Yes, I will definitely never surrender.


Sympathy:

Together, we'll rise up once again to protect a single life from being extinguished.

Awakening yet again with the arriving dawn, I remember that dream of you.
The afterimage in front of my eyes progresses nowhere.
I become powerless as I fade away.

Where are the precious things in life?
Never forget if you believe in tomorrow.

Now is the time to bet your life and move forward.
The more powerful your emotions are, the stronger you’ll become.
Because combining and ever-changing ideals won't last, and will soon come to an end...
Let's exchange an eternal and unbreakable vow from the bottom of our trembling bodies.

You appeared suddenly, making our encounter inevitable.
It wasn't a "chance encounter” or anything like that.
Too many burdening dreams met anxiously in the night.
When that moment came, you gave me a joyful smile.

Because the moonlight shook gently, the future will surely continue to change.
If deeply torn and slanted memories move on, take them to a new, fired up stage.
From this place, a resounding heart knocks on the door to the future.
Heavy, and warm, wear these flames.
Spin your heart towards that one thing.

Deliver… Deliver… Sympathy. Pain… Pain… Empathy.
Soon, these unshakable feelings can be heard like resounding footsteps…

Now is the time to bet your life and move forward.
The more powerful your emotions are, the stronger you’ll become.
Because combining and ever-changing ideals won't last, and will soon come to an end...

Sometimes we fall, sometimes we hesitate.
Endlessly, we dance in the flames of that vow.

bluepenguin
06-23-2014, 10:52 PM
Do you mind posting/linking the kanji? It'd make it easier to check your translation against the original lyrics.