View Full Version : Mahoromatic

07-09-2004, 07:55 AM
Please help me out.. I feel that something is missing..

07-09-2004, 08:19 AM
dirty thoughts are bad :D nice wp - i don't really know what to add, play around with the text, add a sun ray or smth like that, or sparkles - play around with it to add some 'summerish details'/etc.... some grass, perhaps? just try to keep everything vector-ish and not too overcrowded...
oh well, keep in mind that it's just my very weird opinion. keep it up:)

07-09-2004, 03:43 PM
well, in my opinion the colors seem a bit bland, is there any way you can brighten them up a bit?

07-09-2004, 04:23 PM
it looks a little plain.....brighten up the colors and add some grass or sparkles.....

07-09-2004, 06:13 PM
Looks lovely to me. I actually find the bland colours work well with the characters' colours. If you brighten it up it might be a bit eye strained lol don't know.

07-09-2004, 11:56 PM
o0oo! i agree with the sun rays!... that would look preety :^_^:
Also... the outlines of the cracters are kinda funky... like some spots of the outlines are missing... you might want to fux them
but it its looking good!

07-10-2004, 03:20 AM
The outlines are supposed to be like that..

I'll fix the rays as soon as I come home again.. I'll be gone for about a week..

07-10-2004, 03:50 PM
I'm all for simplicity, and I really like it just the way it is.

Xian Pu
07-11-2004, 04:20 AM
I vote for leaving well enough alone. If you brighten it, it would make the characters look bland in comparison. No, I say that everything meshes well as is. ^_^
Good job.

07-11-2004, 04:23 AM
Get rid of the outline in the grass.
That would fix the background.

Xian Pu
07-11-2004, 11:29 AM
Originally posted by [email protected] 11 2004, 04:23 AM
Get rid of the outline in the grass.
That would fix the background.
Outline in the grass? Huh?

07-11-2004, 02:18 PM
The black line on the right between grass and sky - get rid of that line (or make it less dark), it might help the background.

Also, I like the simple outstretched hand with the butterfly, but adding the word 'Marohomatic' atop it makes that part of the image a little too heavy. Maybe make the word a bit smaller, move it away from the butterfly so nothing's competing with the butterfly for attention?

07-16-2004, 04:12 PM
I'm back..

Thanks for the comments and the ideas..
I'll I'll fix the stuff as soon as possible.. ^^;

07-18-2004, 01:00 PM
I need a new computer.. -.-
After 5 minutes with PhotoShop, my comp reboots itself.. ;___;

Anyway.. here's the next v.

07-18-2004, 04:56 PM
the last one is way better ^^

07-18-2004, 05:33 PM
I like the sun rays..looks purty. :) Good job with the last one.

07-19-2004, 02:19 AM
:^_^: Nice leave as it is

07-19-2004, 03:59 AM
Something I didn't notice.. Quality loss deluxe! o.o; I'll have to work with that...

Anyway.. Thanks for the help&#33; ^^

Xian Pu
07-30-2004, 12:40 PM
Did you make this? Or leech it? The reason I ask is because I found this:

http://isoldmysoultonumbus.5chan.net/mm011...c__5f043504.png (http://isoldmysoultonumbus.5chan.net/mm0113l___1089050879ac__5f043504.png)

07-30-2004, 06:13 PM
lol as usual.. try adding more pink