View Full Version : Hajime Saito

Himura Enishi
07-05-2004, 01:06 PM
well, i'm open for suggestions

07-05-2004, 01:43 PM
Dark and mysterious. I like it hehe. I think it could use a little more stuff in the bg tho. I see like you have somewhat of tentacles coming to suck him in or something hehe. :lol: Other than that it looks good imo.

07-05-2004, 02:20 PM
I don't really like the bg, it just seems too plain. The text looks cool, and you did the cutting out quite well. It's good besides the bg.

07-05-2004, 04:32 PM
feels a bit empty, might want to add more to the bg.

07-05-2004, 09:57 PM
It does look pretty empty still. Play up the font! Maybe make it vertical? Also, add elements to make the text blend in more. Maybe more of the tenticles or some tech?