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Xian Pu
06-23-2004, 07:27 AM
Any good? The idea behind it is that she's standing in front of a drop cloth and one corner decided to curl up. If you look you can see a room behind the 'drop cloth'. So, what do you think?

Ivan M.
06-23-2004, 08:20 AM
For some reason, I don't like the backround. It just doesn't fit very well with your character, who needs to look sharper, by the way. But I think you have a nice concept, with the whole "poster peeling behind her" thing.

escaflownemoon
06-23-2004, 09:15 AM
yea I also agree too that the bg doesn't seem to fix even though I didn' look any further with your wallpaper at work..no offence ok but I'm at work and well I am afraid to look at it just because most of the time you make nudity wallpapers lol anyways.

Foxxer
06-23-2004, 09:16 AM
Agreed; the background is too bright and sharp for the character. The color of blue used also doesn't fit well with her color scheme.

The background looks kind of tie-dyed, though, which is neat.

Ivan M.
06-23-2004, 09:29 AM
Oh, and one more thing. You know the gradient you used for the peel..? Well, it's too dark in some areas. It looks kinda weird.

Xian Pu
06-23-2004, 02:53 PM
Originally posted by Ivan [email protected] 23 2004, 09:29 AM
Oh, and one more thing. You know the gradient you used for the peel..? Well, it's too dark in some areas. It looks kinda weird.
It's a part of the shadow?
...

Okay, I changed the BG entirely and added a picture frame.

Stupid Adobe screwed up the image size. >.>

escaflownemoon
06-23-2004, 05:54 PM
Is it just me that she got some scan lines across from her hair..the room bg looks better.

Xian Pu
06-23-2004, 07:10 PM
Hmmm where? I thought I cleaned all that up. >.>

WeyrDragon
06-23-2004, 07:54 PM
i think it looks better than the first, but for some reason the character seems a bit faded to me