View Full Version : King Of Bandits Jing Wall

06-13-2004, 07:57 PM
um...........its a wall of Jing in front of a shiney ball-thing, with a passage writen in the inside cover of every volume of Jing manga.....

Himura Enishi
06-13-2004, 08:31 PM
its kinda, plain, I mean, theres moon, text, and thats it. Maybe try putting stars in the bg or sometin

06-13-2004, 10:07 PM
ok.....added stars.....

06-13-2004, 10:10 PM
heres a second version i thought of while adding the stars...change of text and change of positioning....

which version looks better, the above or this?

06-14-2004, 09:02 AM
hmm I think you should add a moon instead..the text seems a bit dark..can't even read it unless its my screen at work. oh well..

06-15-2004, 08:44 PM
the first one with teh stars is better

_hades the wicked
06-15-2004, 09:34 PM
The first one is awesome, but just make the text less opaque.

06-16-2004, 08:10 PM
made text a little brighter, a tiny bit transparent as well.....

06-16-2004, 08:18 PM
maybe its my screen but the text is still hard to read.

_hades the wicked
06-16-2004, 09:25 PM
lol, sorry, I meant the second one is awesome! :P

06-16-2004, 09:42 PM
ok, heres version two, edges of the text faded out, a tiny bit of transparency, and a tiny bit brighter....

06-17-2004, 05:02 PM
YOu know what you can do with this image is have the bg in odd perspective what I mean is right now you have a still-animated character there..and he is standing in a flat perspective...something dynamic...either you make the sky look higher and also the moon might look better if it was up higher or behind him..that' my opinion anyway..

06-18-2004, 07:28 AM
I agree with escaflowne, yes add something it's too plain.. I don't know why but I don't like that kind of text on a moon :blink:.I prefer the text version(it reminds me Sting's "after the rain as fallen":"... you'll find that I have take you nothing that love can replace in a blink of an eye" :^_^: ),
Just change the font, use also a "dark" or arabic one if you want, so it match more, and make it smaller, and lighter..think as you go into a webpage and you see a text with that opacity, you make this---&#62; >.< ^^

06-18-2004, 04:09 PM
hmm......changed the coloring of moon...made it look kind of stone-like.....changed text font.....

i seem to like the moon this way, what do u think?

06-18-2004, 05:59 PM
The moon looks much better from the greenish colour one.

06-18-2004, 09:04 PM
should i have the text the font that it use to be, but change the moon to the one thats on the current version? the font i have on it now looks weird...the other one looked better i think.....