View Full Version : Genjo Sanzo Wall

06-09-2004, 10:57 PM
Heh... I'm back. ^^ It's been awhile, but I seem to have been having a bit of an... artist's block... as of recently, and this is what I HOPE will get me unstuck.

I'm actually pretty happy with this one, but wanted to put it up for critique nonetheless. Any comments or critisisms are appreciated.

Series: Saiyuki
Character: Genjo Sanzo


06-10-2004, 12:09 PM
welcome back!

I'm diggin' the wall. yay feathers! The left side looks very empty. To keep it clean but fill up some of the space, try adding more feathers like that are around the character. Maybe have them floating by (like caught by the wind) and in different sizes to create depth.

06-10-2004, 01:54 PM
Nice :)
But agree with Pooky, the left side is a bit empty.

06-10-2004, 04:46 PM
You don't need to ADD anything to the left side - maybe you could balance it by gradually making the faint grey lines a little darker, more defined, towards the left?

06-11-2004, 01:32 PM
I think it is very icon friendly..maybe some outstanding feathers floating around may help..if you want that is. :) Other than that I think it looks good.

06-12-2004, 12:33 AM
Ok, I have a revised wall for you all to check out. Thanks for the suggestions&#33; <3

-background image of feathers - made feathers smaller
-added larger feathers to left side


Xian Pu
06-12-2004, 04:30 AM
Better, but it still feels a bit empty to me. It&#39;s a pretty wallpaper, but... something seems to be missing from it. I can&#39;t quite put my finger on it, but it&#39;s there; something seems to be missing.

06-12-2004, 04:56 AM
Yep, better :)

06-12-2004, 12:11 PM
more feathers on the ground since he shooted something and feathers are falling. I guess they should accumulate eventually somewhere...hehe it does look a bit better. :) Keep playing around.

06-12-2004, 08:19 PM

personally, i like the first one better
to me, the feathers on the 2nd one dont really fit

06-13-2004, 06:27 PM
Third revision:

-Added bars on the left side
-Rearranged and added more feathers to left side

Defintely need an opinion on this one, and I appreciate all the help that everyone has given me so far.

I&#39;m still debating on whether or not to take out the bars and add some kind of text. Not too sure, though.


06-13-2004, 06:32 PM
I think the bars look good there maybe add a couple more..

06-13-2004, 06:46 PM
hmmm the bars dont really bother me much.

06-13-2004, 06:54 PM
Fourth Revision:

Well... not much of a revision, but I moved the bars farther to the left. When you use it with your icons (at least on my desktop), it seems to suit it better.