burningsteel
08-23-2011, 08:05 AM
Kanako Kotera - Bokura no Mirai from the PC game Zwei2 (ツヴァイ2) opening.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iD_0BQhdgDM
Issues
1) Could someone check the translation of the next three lines? This is my second translation of a song, and this is harder than my first one.
ちっぽけなプライド 笑いたきゃ笑え
When you want to smile with a little pride then smile
譲れないこの思いは 胸の奥にあるさ
These unyielding feelings are inside in our chests
note:たきゃ = tai, apparently it is Kansei ben or Osaka ben or something.
広い空は僕らを待ってる 未来眩しくて
The spacious sky is waiting for us in the sparkling future
//maybe, "The spacious sky is waiting for us and the future is sparkling" ?
3) If you notice anything any problems please say so.
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//Full thing
作詞:一二三恭 作曲:Falcom Sound Team J.D.K 編曲:神藤由東大 歌:小寺可南子
夢を追いかけて 夢に迷い込み
Chasing after a dream while lost in a dream, and
そう 僕らは 迷い続ける
like this, we continue to be lost
道を見失い 動けないのなら
If you lost sight of the path and cannot continue, then
さあ 思い出そう あの約束
come now, remember that promise
ちっぽけなプライド 笑いたきゃ笑え
When you want to smile with a little pride then smile
譲れないこの思いは 胸の奥にあるさ
These unyielding feelings are inside in our chests
広がる空は僕らを待ってる 未来眩しくて
The extending sky is waiting for us in the sparkling future
七色の橋架けよう 僕らはきっとできるさ
Let's build the seven-colored bridge, we can definitely accomplish it
光追いかけて 闇に迷ったら
If you are chasing after the light and lost in darkness, then
さあ 思い出そう あの約束
come now, remember that promise.
ちっぽけなプライド 笑いたきゃ笑え
When you want to smile with a little pride then smile
忘れないその言葉が 胸の奥に響く
Those unforgettable words reverberate inside in our chests
見果てぬ空は 僕らを呼んでる 未来輝いて
The never-ending sky is calling us in the sparkling future
七色の橋渡ろう 僕らはきっと出会うさ
Let's cross the seven-colored bridge, and we will definitely meet
広い空は僕らを待ってる 未来眩しくて
The spacious sky is waiting for us in the sparkling future
七色の橋架けよう 僕らはきっとできるさ
Let's build the seven-colored bridge, we can definitely accomplish it
-----
yume wo oikakete yume ni mayoikomi
sou bokura wa mayoi tsudzukeru
michi wo miushinai ugokenai no nara
saa omoidasou ano yakusoku
chippokena puraido waraitakya warae
yuzurenai kono omoi wa mune no oku ni aru sa
hirogaru sora wa bokura wo matteru mirai mabushikute
nanairo no hashi kakeyou bokura wa kitto dekiru sa
hikari oikakete, yami ni mayottara
saa omoidasou ano yakusoku
chippokena puraido waraitakya warae
wasurenai sono kotoba ga mune no oku ni hibiku
mihatenu sora wa bokura wo yonderu mirai kagayaite
nanairo no hashi watarou bokura wa kitto deau sa
hirogaru sora wa bokura wo matteru mirai mabushikute
nanairo no hashi kakeyou bokura wa kitto dekiru sa
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Maybe a cuter avatar will get me a response...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iD_0BQhdgDM
Issues
1) Could someone check the translation of the next three lines? This is my second translation of a song, and this is harder than my first one.
ちっぽけなプライド 笑いたきゃ笑え
When you want to smile with a little pride then smile
譲れないこの思いは 胸の奥にあるさ
These unyielding feelings are inside in our chests
note:たきゃ = tai, apparently it is Kansei ben or Osaka ben or something.
広い空は僕らを待ってる 未来眩しくて
The spacious sky is waiting for us in the sparkling future
//maybe, "The spacious sky is waiting for us and the future is sparkling" ?
3) If you notice anything any problems please say so.
=======
//Full thing
作詞:一二三恭 作曲:Falcom Sound Team J.D.K 編曲:神藤由東大 歌:小寺可南子
夢を追いかけて 夢に迷い込み
Chasing after a dream while lost in a dream, and
そう 僕らは 迷い続ける
like this, we continue to be lost
道を見失い 動けないのなら
If you lost sight of the path and cannot continue, then
さあ 思い出そう あの約束
come now, remember that promise
ちっぽけなプライド 笑いたきゃ笑え
When you want to smile with a little pride then smile
譲れないこの思いは 胸の奥にあるさ
These unyielding feelings are inside in our chests
広がる空は僕らを待ってる 未来眩しくて
The extending sky is waiting for us in the sparkling future
七色の橋架けよう 僕らはきっとできるさ
Let's build the seven-colored bridge, we can definitely accomplish it
光追いかけて 闇に迷ったら
If you are chasing after the light and lost in darkness, then
さあ 思い出そう あの約束
come now, remember that promise.
ちっぽけなプライド 笑いたきゃ笑え
When you want to smile with a little pride then smile
忘れないその言葉が 胸の奥に響く
Those unforgettable words reverberate inside in our chests
見果てぬ空は 僕らを呼んでる 未来輝いて
The never-ending sky is calling us in the sparkling future
七色の橋渡ろう 僕らはきっと出会うさ
Let's cross the seven-colored bridge, and we will definitely meet
広い空は僕らを待ってる 未来眩しくて
The spacious sky is waiting for us in the sparkling future
七色の橋架けよう 僕らはきっとできるさ
Let's build the seven-colored bridge, we can definitely accomplish it
-----
yume wo oikakete yume ni mayoikomi
sou bokura wa mayoi tsudzukeru
michi wo miushinai ugokenai no nara
saa omoidasou ano yakusoku
chippokena puraido waraitakya warae
yuzurenai kono omoi wa mune no oku ni aru sa
hirogaru sora wa bokura wo matteru mirai mabushikute
nanairo no hashi kakeyou bokura wa kitto dekiru sa
hikari oikakete, yami ni mayottara
saa omoidasou ano yakusoku
chippokena puraido waraitakya warae
wasurenai sono kotoba ga mune no oku ni hibiku
mihatenu sora wa bokura wo yonderu mirai kagayaite
nanairo no hashi watarou bokura wa kitto deau sa
hirogaru sora wa bokura wo matteru mirai mabushikute
nanairo no hashi kakeyou bokura wa kitto dekiru sa
---
Maybe a cuter avatar will get me a response...