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escaflownemoon
04-19-2004, 07:53 PM
hmm I don't know what is wrong..but seems to me there is. I was going for a spring look with the bg it is Cherry Blossoms and I enlarged the photo and filtre it with a motion blur.

Then I wanted to make like frame in a frame type a deal using the same bg within the frame only smaller version but it didn't look right..so I decided to put in the fountain.. Don't know anymore.. I am really looking for suggestions and opinions. :)

TA DAH...

onslaught2029
04-19-2004, 08:54 PM
I like the frame design, i think if you put a light color outline on the inner frame, it would come out more. Second, if you were the one that put that pencil filter on the background, lessen it a little bit. The characters are a bit grainy, clean those up and you have a quality wall.

MistressPookyChan
04-20-2004, 12:38 AM
besides what onslaught said, check the bottom of the "photo"; it's not lined up with the border.

Wandering_Youth
04-20-2004, 01:20 AM
Besides what the other have said, I'm not fond of the colors and the frame is hard on my eyes, but that's just me.

escaflownemoon
04-21-2004, 07:21 PM
ok I fixed up the graininess but I know there are still some jagged lines..any idea how I can fix that easily?

I changed the colour of the bg to a blue ..I thought as well the pink was hard on my eyes too.

Changed the frame to white and move the two characters down.

Tell me what you think..:) oh by the way I got two version..couldn't decide..but in the

Version 2a tell me if the characters look better in normal colours, if so, then I can work on the extraction that is worth it..if..Version 2b looks better then I will work from there..

escaflownemoon
04-21-2004, 07:22 PM
and version2b

fento
04-22-2004, 12:18 AM
I like v2b the best :)

escaflownemoon
04-23-2004, 11:33 AM
Is there anything else that needs to be added to the wallpaper to v2b?
I feel there is but dont' know what else..

Got any Ideas????? :)

EDIT: Fixed the frame a bit..and add text but I think it is unnecessary...or it may need to be moved somewhere.. added some leaves...

escaflownemoon
04-30-2004, 06:46 PM
*bump*

Candy-StarR
04-30-2004, 06:55 PM
I think i like the last one the best...
but the edges of the characters are a little jagged

MistressPookyChan
04-30-2004, 11:14 PM
i like the colors in the latest version better. It's very pretty. If you want to make it not-so-monotone, you could make the characters black and white, and then color certain parts of the characters blue (like an article of clothing, a ribbon, etc).

EternalBlue
05-01-2004, 08:16 AM
Wagh blue, kawaii ^^. Yea I agree with pooky, just colour some parts of the charas, not all of them ^^

escaflownemoon
05-06-2004, 12:44 PM
pooky..I wasn't sure if this is what you meant by not-so-montone..

so I did a litle bit of it..and before I proceed with it more..I thought I post it here to make sure I was on the right track or not..

more suggestions are welcomed.

Justina / Tenchigirl15
05-06-2004, 02:51 PM
I think I like this one more better!!! if you smooth the edges on the chrs it will be better!!!!!! ;)

onslaught2029
05-06-2004, 10:12 PM
It gets extra points for it being a shade of blue. ;)

escaflownemoon
05-07-2004, 07:48 AM
ok I will see what I can do to smooth out the jagged edges..

escaflownemoon
05-08-2004, 01:46 PM
ok I think I somewhat fixed the jagged edges by using the smudge tool.

how does it look?