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tsubasa92
03-27-2011, 09:58 PM
I just realized that I made 2 typo errors after I've submitted the lyrics.

Brave - this song is under the album "Soleil", not "Soleli".

Nagare Boshi - 眩しい is "mabushii", not "mamushii".

I'm really sorry for any inconvenience caused. :p

animeyay
03-27-2011, 10:23 PM
It's okay, as I was approving the songs, I noticed the errors and fixed them already.

Uh, I'm not discouraging you or anything, but please, just be a little careful with the romaji, please?
like 繋ぐ should be tsunagu not tsunaku...
哀しみ in "simple words" is kanashimi not, uh, forgot what you put there.

but anyway, keep up the work! =)

AzureDark
03-28-2011, 12:46 AM
And next time just PM any of us if you're correcting your own work.

Rei
03-28-2011, 10:54 AM
Oh, good. I might as well correct this. Song: Faith. (http://www.animelyrics.com/jpop/irinomiyu/miyufaith.htm)

jibun rashisa no shosou(shousou) honne no meisoku(meisou)
motto jiyuu ni kanjite

dareka no maeda to tsui kakkotsukete(kakkoutsukete) shimatte
kake hanareteku jibun ni kiraki(iyake) ga sashitari
sarake dasu TAIMINGU muzukashiku narunara
ari no mama saisho kara butsukatte mitai

fumi dasu ippo wa itsu datte
kotae o shiranai bun taidan(daitan) ni mo nareru

jibun rashisatte nanda? honne de nanda?
motto jiyuu ni kanjite
mezashita kyou wa yosouijou ni chanto susumeterunda
jibun no ishi de eranda kara mae o muite irareru
fukiyou(bukiyou) datte tarinaku tatte
zenryoku de kakenukete miseru sa

onaji mainichi wa nai onaji CHANSU mo nai
hitotsu zutsu mukiatte muda ni shinai you ni
tachidomaranai genchi(kagiri)* michi wa tsuzuite iku
gamushara ni naru gurai(kurai) honki ni narerunda

tsukamitai genjitsu no temae de
ippo mo hikanai ketsui yuzurenai asu e

jibun wo shinjite urakiranai(uragiranai) de makenai ishi kanjite
PURAIDO ga mada tsuyogari demo itsuka honmono ni naru
ima ijou o motto saki o kantan ni akiramenai
burenai yuuki mikata ni shite zenryoku de butsukatte ikeru sa

unmei ya hiton(hito) no sei ni wa suru na
dare demo nai kono michi ikite iku PURAIDO

jibun rashisatte nanda? honne de nanda?
motto jiyuu ni kanjite
mezashita kyou wa yosouijou ni chan to susumete run da
jibun no ishi de erandakara mae o muite irareru
fukiyou(bukiyou) datte tarinaku tatte
zenryoku de kakenukete miseru sa

asu e to ikeru sa

*The kanji lyrics on-site say 限ち, when the actual lyrics are 限り。

Aaaaand...I think that's it.

animeyay
03-28-2011, 02:25 PM
while making the corrections, I also noticed one, in the 4th and second-to-the-last stanzas, honne tte not honne de
and thanks! I didn't have time to skim through all of his submissions yesterday.

Rei
03-29-2011, 02:25 AM
I missed that one out. Woah you even check through translits? (=

animeyay
03-29-2011, 09:40 AM
I normally only skim very quickly thru submissions for errors too obvious to ignore. But since I was planning on translating all of Irino Miyu's songs, I naturally paid a bit more attention to them, ha.

Rei
03-29-2011, 09:50 AM
Those in Faith were too obvious to ignore. Wait...Irino Miyu is Saji Crossroad's voice actor. >_> Hmm. And I'd never heard of him, lol.

animeyay
03-29-2011, 11:18 AM
Don't forget there are more than one lyrics admins here lol, like often Azure would get to the submissions before I do.

You've never heard of Irino Miyu?! Syaoran from Tsubasa Chronicle??? @[email protected]

animeyay
03-29-2011, 08:13 PM
@tsubasa92 (http://www.animeforum.com/member.php?202943-tsubasa92)

I appreciate your contribution, I really do, we all do, but pleeeeeeeeeease, consult a dictionary for words you're unsure of... and especially watch out for sound changes: 旅(tabi) + 立つ(tatsu) = tabidatsu, ビニール(BINIIRU) + 傘(kasa) = BINIIRU-gasa, etc.

Others, oh, 大切 is taisetsu, not daisetsu, remember that. A dictionary would really come in handy for kanji with irregular readings. 下手 should be heta not gete, and 上手く is umaku not uwateku...

AzureDark
03-29-2011, 08:32 PM
animeyay: your call, demote tsubasa92 to Lv0?

I first heard of Irino from Kana Ueda's radio show...

animeyay
03-29-2011, 09:26 PM
Hmm, that may be a little too drastic, lol, and you know how soft forgiving I am. Let's give him another chance. しかし、もしまた間違いだらけのローマ字を出しちゃったら、降格にしよう。

Kana Ueda's radio show? XD I only remember her for her role in Gakuen Alice.

AzureDark
03-29-2011, 11:58 PM
You only heard little of Kana-sama?! *insert multitude of roles* @[email protected]

Rei
03-30-2011, 12:36 AM
Nope, never was a fan of Tsubasa, or CLAMP, for that matter. That's why I only heard of him from Gundam 00...I don't even know who Kana Ueda is

tsubasa92's a girl, btw. I knew her irl, albeit for a short while...I dunno if she'd be able to read what you typed out at the back of your sentence though...I think it goes something like: But if further mistakes are made with the romaji, I'll demote her.

Yeah, I read somewhere that you once said that you'd never be able to ban anyone lol while snooping around people's profile pages

tsubasa92
04-01-2011, 02:08 AM
Oops. I really appreciate your help...Really sorry if I cause you guys so much trouble.

I did the transliteration for Faith and Amaoto quite some time ago, before I get meself a Japanese kanji dictionary. I think the rest of the songs are pretty much ok...

I still have a few more kanji lyrics with me, but I'm too busy to do any more translit. (xRiikox should know that this is my PW year.) So if anyone wants to do it I'll PM the kanji to that person?

@ xRiikox: I'm just too lazy to change my gender part. Anyway I don't get to go online often, I could only use the school computer during break time, and I have to keep rushing for class.

It's my own fault that I should have proof-read them before I submit... *90 degree bow in apology*

animeyay
04-01-2011, 06:50 AM
Uh, I think I might have accidentally scared her lol

and Riichan, stop knowing everyone! XD

Rei
04-01-2011, 10:53 AM
I think it was a combination of all three of us, lol. >_<

@tsubasa92 (http://www.animeforum.com/member.php?u=202943): I thought PW was in year 2...aren't you in year 3 now? (I might not know...) Yeah, I used to do that. =) Breaks in school are pretty short though...

I just happen to know her from a former school. No, I don't know everyone, unfortunately. =P