Ah! My Goddess Wp

LavaBug · 10-31-2003, 01:40 PM

Well... i did that one about 3 weeks ago and i´m still not sure if it is good or not (though i like the idea of it) what do you think ?

http://www.drsch.de/lavabugprovi/bildergross/amgurd.jpg

acamori · 10-31-2003, 01:53 PM

that's really cool :lol: ! though i think the swirling fogish stuff should be slightly less opaque (so it looks more like fog if that's what you were going for)
i'm not sure if it's intentional or not but your chara pic seems a little grainy, which kinda fits with the wall so i wouldn't worry about it too much.

oh yeah, and some of your lines are a little jagged maybe try to smooth those up a little.

Golden Anime · 10-31-2003, 03:58 PM

yes, definatly reduce the optacity of those swirls

its an excellent wallpaper, but the focal point seems to be in the top left corner instead of on the stock image
i suggest darkening that corner and lightening the top right corner to shift the focal point

LavaBug · 10-31-2003, 05:49 PM

Well actually those twirls are supposed to be wings (i know they dont look like that very much -_-°) If anything i have to redo them completely to make them more "recogniseable".

acamori · 10-31-2003, 05:55 PM

well i guess i can see the wingedness of it now that you've mentioned it, but i don't think anyone can tell without knowing about it sooo, making them more winglike would be a good idea.

LavaBug · 11-06-2003, 05:19 PM

well there wont be any updates for this one..since i lost my files due a harddisk breakdown...

darkparrot · 11-06-2003, 07:50 PM

Well... I think that this is good overall! The only things that I can think of that people might not like is the "wings", and the "busyness" of the wallpaper.

WinterC_16 · 11-08-2003, 12:25 AM

U don't need to make them look like wings, they look great the way they are. I think this is a great wp!

_hades the wicked · 11-08-2003, 12:30 AM

I think it's good as is. Pretty good job :)

onslaught2029 · 11-10-2003, 07:11 PM

Thats tight yo !

10-31-2003, 01:40 PM	#1
LavaBug ☃ Snowmen! ☃ Last Online: Today 03:52 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: ヨドバシカメラ Age: 28 Gender: Visit LavaBug's Blog View LavaBug's Walls (26) Total Points: 1,506.17 Donate Posts: 529 My Mood: My Photos: (5) Rep Power: 781	Well... i did that one about 3 weeks ago and i´m still not sure if it is good or not (though i like the idea of it) what do you think ? http://www.drsch.de/lavabugprovi/bildergross/amgurd.jpg __________________ Gaijin can't 日本語 !

10-31-2003, 01:53 PM	#2
acamori Senior Member Last Online: 12-09-2008 03:02 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: North side of Olympus Mons Age: 24 View acamori's Walls (7) Total Points: 1,317.00 Donate Posts: 467 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 7	that's really cool :lol: ! though i think the swirling fogish stuff should be slightly less opaque (so it looks more like fog if that's what you were going for) i'm not sure if it's intentional or not but your chara pic seems a little grainy, which kinda fits with the wall so i wouldn't worry about it too much. oh yeah, and some of your lines are a little jagged maybe try to smooth those up a little. __________________ Sanity is a stereotype I wish not to be associated with, the same applies to normality. my MiniTokyo Gallery if you want bigger walls.

10-31-2003, 03:58 PM	#3
Golden Anime Member Last Online: 01-04-2004 09:10 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 View Golden Anime's Walls (1) Total Points: 106.00 Donate Posts: 34 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	yes, definatly reduce the optacity of those swirls its an excellent wallpaper, but the focal point seems to be in the top left corner instead of on the stock image i suggest darkening that corner and lightening the top right corner to shift the focal point __________________ Caught in this cage I sing my song.

10-31-2003, 05:49 PM	#4
LavaBug ☃ Snowmen! ☃ Last Online: Today 03:52 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: ヨドバシカメラ Age: 28 Gender: Visit LavaBug's Blog View LavaBug's Walls (26) Total Points: 1,506.17 Donate Posts: 529 My Mood: My Photos: (5) Rep Power: 781	Well actually those twirls are supposed to be wings (i know they dont look like that very much -_-°) If anything i have to redo them completely to make them more "recogniseable". __________________ Gaijin can't 日本語 !

10-31-2003, 05:55 PM	#5
acamori Senior Member Last Online: 12-09-2008 03:02 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: North side of Olympus Mons Age: 24 View acamori's Walls (7) Total Points: 1,317.00 Donate Posts: 467 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 7	well i guess i can see the wingedness of it now that you've mentioned it, but i don't think anyone can tell without knowing about it sooo, making them more winglike would be a good idea. __________________ Sanity is a stereotype I wish not to be associated with, the same applies to normality. my MiniTokyo Gallery if you want bigger walls.

11-06-2003, 05:19 PM	#6
LavaBug ☃ Snowmen! ☃ Last Online: Today 03:52 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: ヨドバシカメラ Age: 28 Gender: Visit LavaBug's Blog View LavaBug's Walls (26) Total Points: 1,506.17 Donate Posts: 529 My Mood: My Photos: (5) Rep Power: 781	well there wont be any updates for this one..since i lost my files due a harddisk breakdown... __________________ Gaijin can't 日本語 !

11-06-2003, 07:50 PM	#7
darkparrot Member Last Online: 08-15-2004 07:03 AM Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Maine, USA Total Points: 100.00 Donate Posts: 96 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	Well... I think that this is good overall! The only things that I can think of that people might not like is the "wings", and the "busyness" of the wallpaper.

11-08-2003, 12:25 AM	#8
WinterC_16 Senior Member Last Online: 04-04-2005 01:49 PM Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: New York View WinterC_16's Walls (2) Total Points: 465.20 Donate Posts: 221 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	U don't need to make them look like wings, they look great the way they are. I think this is a great wp! __________________ people try to control other people because they're shallow among other things

11-08-2003, 12:30 AM	#9
_hades the wicked Lord of the Netherworld Last Online: 04-26-2005 01:40 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Brazil Age: 22 Total Points: 1,526.20 Donate Posts: 1,091 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 22	I think it's good as is. Pretty good job :) __________________

11-10-2003, 07:11 PM	#10
onslaught2029 Senior Member Last Online: 10-01-2008 10:09 AM Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Clemson, SC View onslaught2029's Walls (3) Total Points: 596.00 Donate Posts: 246 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	Thats tight yo ! __________________ <span style='font-family:Geneva'><span style='font-size:21pt;line-height:100%'><span style='color:orange'>Matt's Cyberspace</span></span></span>

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