An Ehrgeiz Wall...

_hades the wicked · 10-30-2003, 10:45 PM

Here, it's under construction still... ß version... Comments anyone?

acamori · 10-30-2003, 10:57 PM

my only real complaints are that his pose makes me think he's moving in the opposite direction as you make it look (or i may be backwards) and i think the colors of the chara seem slightly washed out to me.

diablo111 · 10-30-2003, 11:30 PM

To me it looks like he's moving forward. I like it, everything goes pretty well together...can't wait to see the final product.

phantasmagoria · 10-31-2003, 09:13 PM

To me it looks like he's dashing forward. I like it, I can't wait for the finished version.

_hades the wicked · 10-31-2003, 10:15 PM

Err... That's why I asked feedback... So I can finish it ^^;;
Also, can anyone help me to which kanji is "zan", or slash...? I don't feel like going through all of my Love Hina manga just to find that out, and I wanted to use that on the background of the wall, so if anyone can help me, I'd be glad.

acamori · 10-31-2003, 11:41 PM

well my source is saying that the "zan" kaji (which means cut/kill with a sword) should look like this:

_hades the wicked · 11-01-2003, 01:35 PM

OK thanks, just updated it... See above.

default · 11-01-2003, 02:09 PM

The wallpaper has good design, but I will bring a couple of things to your attention. To make the appearance of him dashing forward, he should get progressively larger. The two faded stances of the man should get progressively smaller as the get further away. Just a quick reminder of perspective. Secondly, The stained glass filter never made sense to me. I could never find a use for it where it didn't bother me. Instead of using a filter, you might try to fill thet in with some <u>realistic<u> clouds (not the cloud filter, mind you) or something else that won't take away from the main subject. The color is good. I like it.

-default

_hades the wicked · 11-01-2003, 03:01 PM

OK, I did the cloud thing, and the perspective thing (even though he wasn't supposed to come from the back to the front like everyone said, I thought it'd look better :p), I have two more versions though, one with that same cloud background but hued red and one with another cloud background hued red.

Miko · 11-02-2003, 12:46 AM

I'm glad to see others are using shadowboxes too. :P

Warder · 11-02-2003, 01:05 AM

I like the paper alot, I assume your going to do abit more with the Ehrgeiz text? It's abit plain.

_hades the wicked · 11-02-2003, 10:36 AM

Yeah I thought about that too, but I don't know what to do with that text (like I said, ß version :P)
<s>Miko, what do you mean shadow boxes?</s> ::edit:: wait nevermind...

10-30-2003, 10:45 PM	#1
_hades the wicked Lord of the Netherworld Last Online: 04-26-2005 01:40 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Brazil Age: 22 Total Points: 1,526.20 Donate Posts: 1,091 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 22	Here, it's under construction still... ß version... Comments anyone? __________________

10-30-2003, 10:57 PM	#2
acamori Senior Member Last Online: 12-09-2008 03:02 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: North side of Olympus Mons Age: 24 View acamori's Walls (7) Total Points: 1,317.00 Donate Posts: 467 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 7	my only real complaints are that his pose makes me think he's moving in the opposite direction as you make it look (or i may be backwards) and i think the colors of the chara seem slightly washed out to me. __________________ Sanity is a stereotype I wish not to be associated with, the same applies to normality. my MiniTokyo Gallery if you want bigger walls.

10-30-2003, 11:30 PM	#3
diablo111 Senior Member Last Online: 03-13-2005 04:44 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 View diablo111's Walls (14) Total Points: 459.00 Donate Posts: 249 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	To me it looks like he's moving forward. I like it, everything goes pretty well together...can't wait to see the final product. __________________

10-31-2003, 09:13 PM	#4
phantasmagoria Member Last Online: 01-30-2004 11:16 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Ohio, USA Total Points: 90.00 Donate Posts: 66 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	To me it looks like he's dashing forward. I like it, I can't wait for the finished version. __________________ <span style='color:red'>"My armies are slain. My castle lies in ruins. My enemies have taken everything from me, all my wealth and power. But they could not kill me. I still walk the Earth, weak but alive. They have taken everything but the beating of my undead heart. Now they will learn of fear, these mewing babies who thought they could destroy me. I shall regain my powers, and come to them in the night. And my visits shall not be kind." --Kain, Legacy of Kain: Blood Omen</span>

10-31-2003, 10:15 PM	#5
_hades the wicked Lord of the Netherworld Last Online: 04-26-2005 01:40 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Brazil Age: 22 Total Points: 1,526.20 Donate Posts: 1,091 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 22	Err... That's why I asked feedback... So I can finish it ^^;; Also, can anyone help me to which kanji is "zan", or slash...? I don't feel like going through all of my Love Hina manga just to find that out, and I wanted to use that on the background of the wall, so if anyone can help me, I'd be glad. __________________

10-31-2003, 11:41 PM	#6
acamori Senior Member Last Online: 12-09-2008 03:02 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: North side of Olympus Mons Age: 24 View acamori's Walls (7) Total Points: 1,317.00 Donate Posts: 467 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 7	well my source is saying that the "zan" kaji (which means cut/kill with a sword) should look like this: __________________ Sanity is a stereotype I wish not to be associated with, the same applies to normality. my MiniTokyo Gallery if you want bigger walls.

11-01-2003, 01:35 PM	#7
_hades the wicked Lord of the Netherworld Last Online: 04-26-2005 01:40 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Brazil Age: 22 Total Points: 1,526.20 Donate Posts: 1,091 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 22	OK thanks, just updated it... See above. __________________

11-01-2003, 02:09 PM	#8
default Junior Member Last Online: 06-12-2007 03:57 AM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Floating in the clouds... Total Points: 32.00 Donate Posts: 24 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	The wallpaper has good design, but I will bring a couple of things to your attention. To make the appearance of him dashing forward, he should get progressively larger. The two faded stances of the man should get progressively smaller as the get further away. Just a quick reminder of perspective. Secondly, The stained glass filter never made sense to me. I could never find a use for it where it didn't bother me. Instead of using a filter, you might try to fill thet in with some <u>realistic<u> clouds (not the cloud filter, mind you) or something else that won't take away from the main subject. The color is good. I like it. -default

11-01-2003, 03:01 PM	#9
_hades the wicked Lord of the Netherworld Last Online: 04-26-2005 01:40 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Brazil Age: 22 Total Points: 1,526.20 Donate Posts: 1,091 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 22	OK, I did the cloud thing, and the perspective thing (even though he wasn't supposed to come from the back to the front like everyone said, I thought it'd look better :p), I have two more versions though, one with that same cloud background but hued red and one with another cloud background hued red. __________________

11-02-2003, 12:46 AM	#10
Miko Senior Member Last Online: 06-13-2007 07:59 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Neo-Tokyo View Miko's Walls (13) Total Points: 474.00 Donate Posts: 209 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	I'm glad to see others are using shadowboxes too. :P __________________

11-02-2003, 01:05 AM	#11
Warder Junior Member Last Online: 11-04-2003 09:30 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: On a high horse. Total Points: 46.00 Donate Posts: 8 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	I like the paper alot, I assume your going to do abit more with the Ehrgeiz text? It's abit plain. __________________

11-02-2003, 10:36 AM	#12
_hades the wicked Lord of the Netherworld Last Online: 04-26-2005 01:40 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Brazil Age: 22 Total Points: 1,526.20 Donate Posts: 1,091 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 22	Yeah I thought about that too, but I don't know what to do with that text (like I said, ß version :P) <s>Miko, what do you mean shadow boxes?</s> ::edit:: wait nevermind... __________________

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