Evangelion Wp

Warder · 10-30-2003, 12:42 AM

Well i'm a starter here and all but i'd like some feedback on a wp I made. Some tips wouldn't be amiss either. Heh.

MistressPookyChan · 10-30-2003, 12:55 AM

goodness, those are some big nipples!

*ahem* so anyway, the font is a neat idea. I would try to bring out her name a bit.

Warder · 10-30-2003, 01:01 AM

Uhm... yes. Well, finding good images of Rei that aren't complete hentai isn't easy. And this one just shouted wall at me.

Any suggestions on how to bring out her name without messing up the feel of the picture?

MistressPookyChan · 10-30-2003, 11:09 AM

different type of font or emphasis her name as-is. (add a glow around it, bold it, different color, etc)

setsuna · 10-30-2003, 01:49 PM

Those nipples are definately big... interesting... lucky me for rarely finding hentai pics of Rei. :P

But I like the main idea and colors.. spotlight is cute. Some of the letters should be in focus, ne? (Like Pookychan said about the name) All the blurriness needs to come to an end at some point because it makes my eyes go in circles... inner/outer glow and drop shadows could do some cute effects... Play with it!

Warder · 10-30-2003, 05:52 PM

Hm unfourtunatly for me I lost some files, not sure how... The Rei photoshop doc included. Can't really touch it up until I remake it and i'm working on some others.

Sucks.

phantasmagoria · 10-30-2003, 09:27 PM

Heh, we may need to put age ratings on these things... Well, when you remake it I think you should make some of the words a little more focused so that it's not so blurry.

_hades the wicked · 10-30-2003, 10:27 PM

I don't think that it is needed an age rating for that one at all... There is nothing explicit about it... It just shows Rei with her clothes on...
The wall is nice, but the text in general is too blurry.

diablo111 · 10-30-2003, 11:38 PM

Not bad on the whole...nips are a bit ostentatious...but that aside, the text is way too distracting.

ownerizer · 10-31-2003, 12:08 AM

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Originally posted by Warder@Oct 30 2003, 12:37 AM
Well i'm a starter here and all but i'd like some feedback on a wp I made. Some tips wouldn't be amiss either. Heh.

<_< I don't know about this one, but I think you're faking it.

Warder · 10-31-2003, 10:33 AM

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I don't know about this one, but I think you're faking it.

Faking it how? Do you think I didn't make this one or something?

And as for the text in the back it was supposed to be kinda attention getting. I thought the blurred letting until you could just make it out was a nice touch, guess not though. Wouldn't plain text with glow or something like that be too plain?

diablo111 · 10-31-2003, 11:15 AM

Sometimes small unobtrusive text is more meaningfull than big attention grabbing text. You want the attention on the bg and character...not the text.

At least that's my tatse in walls.

phantasmagoria · 10-31-2003, 09:07 PM

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Originally posted by Warder@Oct 31 2003, 10:28 AM

Quote:

I don't know about this one, but I think you're faking it.

Faking it how? Do you think I didn't make this one or something?

And as for the text in the back it was supposed to be kinda attention getting. I thought the blurred letting until you could just make it out was a nice touch, guess not though. Wouldn't plain text with glow or something like that be too plain?

The text isn't terrible, it's just a little too blurry. Tone that down a bit and it would look better.

10-30-2003, 12:42 AM	#1
Warder Junior Member Last Online: 11-04-2003 09:30 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: On a high horse. Total Points: 46.00 Donate Posts: 8 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	Well i'm a starter here and all but i'd like some feedback on a wp I made. Some tips wouldn't be amiss either. Heh. __________________

10-30-2003, 12:55 AM	#2
MistressPookyChan ☃ Snowmen! ☃ Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: The 'burbs of Tokyo Age: 28 Gender: Visit MistressPookyChan's Blog View MistressPookyChan's Walls (13) Total Points: 411,545.80 Donate Posts: 5,732 My Mood: My Photos: (11) Rep Power: 1426	goodness, those are some big nipples! ahem so anyway, the font is a neat idea. I would try to bring out her name a bit. __________________ Pink is the new Pooky Party it up in Wallpapers \| join the AF Gaia guild! "Spilt coffee has a sad remembrance of old"- from a plastic bag seen on the train musing of a mod : Illuminated Spirits : Theme: uber_pink

10-30-2003, 01:01 AM	#3
Warder Junior Member Last Online: 11-04-2003 09:30 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: On a high horse. Total Points: 46.00 Donate Posts: 8 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	Uhm... yes. Well, finding good images of Rei that aren't complete hentai isn't easy. And this one just shouted wall at me. Any suggestions on how to bring out her name without messing up the feel of the picture? __________________

10-30-2003, 11:09 AM	#4
MistressPookyChan ☃ Snowmen! ☃ Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: The 'burbs of Tokyo Age: 28 Gender: Visit MistressPookyChan's Blog View MistressPookyChan's Walls (13) Total Points: 411,545.80 Donate Posts: 5,732 My Mood: My Photos: (11) Rep Power: 1426	different type of font or emphasis her name as-is. (add a glow around it, bold it, different color, etc) __________________ Pink is the new Pooky Party it up in Wallpapers \| join the AF Gaia guild! "Spilt coffee has a sad remembrance of old"- from a plastic bag seen on the train musing of a mod : Illuminated Spirits : Theme: uber_pink

10-30-2003, 01:49 PM	#5
setsuna Senior Member Last Online: 02-18-2005 07:26 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Total Points: 275.01 Donate Posts: 189 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	Those nipples are definately big... interesting... lucky me for rarely finding hentai pics of Rei. :P But I like the main idea and colors.. spotlight is cute. Some of the letters should be in focus, ne? (Like Pookychan said about the name) All the blurriness needs to come to an end at some point because it makes my eyes go in circles... inner/outer glow and drop shadows could do some cute effects... Play with it! __________________ Purple are the color of the clothes I wear, clothes I wear, clothes I wear... My Wallpaper ramblings... (formerly Codename: Sailor Moon)

10-30-2003, 05:52 PM	#6
Warder Junior Member Last Online: 11-04-2003 09:30 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: On a high horse. Total Points: 46.00 Donate Posts: 8 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	Hm unfourtunatly for me I lost some files, not sure how... The Rei photoshop doc included. Can't really touch it up until I remake it and i'm working on some others. Sucks. __________________

10-30-2003, 09:27 PM	#7
phantasmagoria Member Last Online: 01-30-2004 11:16 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Ohio, USA Total Points: 90.00 Donate Posts: 66 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	Heh, we may need to put age ratings on these things... Well, when you remake it I think you should make some of the words a little more focused so that it's not so blurry. __________________ <span style='color:red'>"My armies are slain. My castle lies in ruins. My enemies have taken everything from me, all my wealth and power. But they could not kill me. I still walk the Earth, weak but alive. They have taken everything but the beating of my undead heart. Now they will learn of fear, these mewing babies who thought they could destroy me. I shall regain my powers, and come to them in the night. And my visits shall not be kind." --Kain, Legacy of Kain: Blood Omen</span>

10-30-2003, 10:27 PM	#8
_hades the wicked Lord of the Netherworld Last Online: 04-26-2005 01:40 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Brazil Age: 22 Total Points: 1,526.20 Donate Posts: 1,091 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 22	I don't think that it is needed an age rating for that one at all... There is nothing explicit about it... It just shows Rei with her clothes on... The wall is nice, but the text in general is too blurry. __________________

10-30-2003, 11:38 PM	#9
diablo111 Senior Member Last Online: 03-13-2005 04:44 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 View diablo111's Walls (14) Total Points: 459.00 Donate Posts: 249 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	Not bad on the whole...nips are a bit ostentatious...but that aside, the text is way too distracting. __________________

10-31-2003, 11:15 AM	#12
diablo111 Senior Member Last Online: 03-13-2005 04:44 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 View diablo111's Walls (14) Total Points: 459.00 Donate Posts: 249 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	Sometimes small unobtrusive text is more meaningfull than big attention grabbing text. You want the attention on the bg and character...not the text. At least that's my tatse in walls. __________________

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