Armitage Iii

acamori · 10-25-2003, 06:02 PM

i just did this one today, i know i need something more but i'm stuck. let me know what you think:

phantasmagoria · 10-27-2003, 06:39 PM

Hmm, Armitage seems a little fuzzy looking. And the left side seems a little too empty, even for a simplistic look.

Golden Anime · 10-27-2003, 06:45 PM

hmm not bad, wayyy to fuzzy for my tastes though

now before you do it again, please dont scale up a jpg image from its original size, it looks terrible.

the background seems a bit too close to the foreground, it needs to be pushed back a few notches, try adding a drop shadow to the stock (once you clean it up) and darkening the white area in the middle.
the overall composition is nice, just needs alot of work, perhaps some sharper objects in the background aswell.

acamori · 10-27-2003, 07:23 PM

well, the armitage picture is it's original size, unfortunatly when i saved the psd as a jpg i had to compress it considerably so it wouldn't overload the bandwidth (it was big for some reason) i'll see if i can do anything about it.

_hades the wicked · 10-27-2003, 10:36 PM

I don't know... I don't have any real comments on this one, except for making the text less distracting and making the pic quality better...

10-25-2003, 06:02 PM	#1
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10-27-2003, 06:39 PM	#2
phantasmagoria Member Last Online: 01-30-2004 11:16 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Ohio, USA Total Points: 90.00 Donate Posts: 66 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	Hmm, Armitage seems a little fuzzy looking. And the left side seems a little too empty, even for a simplistic look. __________________ <span style='color:red'>"My armies are slain. My castle lies in ruins. My enemies have taken everything from me, all my wealth and power. But they could not kill me. I still walk the Earth, weak but alive. They have taken everything but the beating of my undead heart. Now they will learn of fear, these mewing babies who thought they could destroy me. I shall regain my powers, and come to them in the night. And my visits shall not be kind." --Kain, Legacy of Kain: Blood Omen</span>

10-27-2003, 06:45 PM	#3
Golden Anime Member Last Online: 01-04-2004 09:10 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 View Golden Anime's Walls (1) Total Points: 106.00 Donate Posts: 34 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	hmm not bad, wayyy to fuzzy for my tastes though now before you do it again, please dont scale up a jpg image from its original size, it looks terrible. the background seems a bit too close to the foreground, it needs to be pushed back a few notches, try adding a drop shadow to the stock (once you clean it up) and darkening the white area in the middle. the overall composition is nice, just needs alot of work, perhaps some sharper objects in the background aswell. __________________ Caught in this cage I sing my song.

10-27-2003, 07:23 PM	#4
acamori Senior Member Last Online: 12-09-2008 03:02 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: North side of Olympus Mons Age: 24 View acamori's Walls (7) Total Points: 1,317.00 Donate Posts: 467 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 7	well, the armitage picture is it's original size, unfortunatly when i saved the psd as a jpg i had to compress it considerably so it wouldn't overload the bandwidth (it was big for some reason) i'll see if i can do anything about it. __________________ Sanity is a stereotype I wish not to be associated with, the same applies to normality. my MiniTokyo Gallery if you want bigger walls.

10-27-2003, 10:36 PM	#5
_hades the wicked Lord of the Netherworld Last Online: 04-26-2005 01:40 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: Brazil Age: 22 Total Points: 1,526.20 Donate Posts: 1,091 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 22	I don't know... I don't have any real comments on this one, except for making the text less distracting and making the pic quality better... __________________

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