10-20-2003, 11:27 PM
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It's OK. The text is too attention drawing, try taking out that shadow, the cutout is poor, try working that better, and you should take out those leaves next to her head...
I like the background, it looks very smooth.
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10-21-2003, 12:13 AM
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along with what else was added, i would say to take out the film roll effect and replace it with pale blue boxes; just something to make it stand out a bit from the background. Also, adding a darker border around the character might help make her stand out more. need some help doing that? I'd be happy to help ya!
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10-21-2003, 04:20 AM
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the cutout is poor because i use magic wand (due to my laziness :P ) i'll create the new one ^^ i'll remove the shadow of the text btw u mean is on her back? the green one? isn't it her wings? fairy wings and i dont get the meaning of pale blue boxes, how does it like? |
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10-21-2003, 05:05 AM
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by pale blue boxes I ment that instead of the black film reels that it should be more simple, like boxes. the boxes should then match the rest of the wallpaper, like a blue color. I can make a little example if you still don't understand. ^-^ Not a problem! ;D
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10-21-2003, 11:37 PM
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A yellow glow doesn't go well there, neither on the text nor on the character. And the leaves I mean the ones on her head, not her wings...
Oh yeah, and if you need boxes examples, Pooky's the best one to ask that, right Pooky? ;)
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10-21-2003, 11:41 PM
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i agree; change the outter glow to white. it would suit the paper more. Also, the little flakes are nice! how about alternating their size and giving them a little more blur?
dark's right, i know my boxes. ^-^; if you want help on them, just speak up!
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