Chobistu Walls

setsuna · 10-18-2003, 02:41 PM

OK! This is it.. I am ready for constructive criticism! These are in the order I created them..

First: Sumomo
Second: Kotoko
Third: Chii&Sumomo

Don't flame my poor little self.. please... =^_^=;;

Omni · 10-18-2003, 07:14 PM

They're all great, especially the last one. Simplicity at it's best, hehe

MistressPookyChan · 10-18-2003, 08:01 PM

1st one: the text is not needed at all, but if you really want to have text, make it smaller.

2nd one: Try to find a larger pic or emphasis the picture that is on there. The pic that you are currently using also doesn't fit the colors in the wallpaper. By changing the hue, you could make make it blend with the background more.

3rd one: again, try to make a little bit of emphasis on the picture so that it looks like it wasnt just C&Ped on there.

Now for the better points. ^-^;; The backgrounds themselves are beautiful! the colors are wonderful and the elements are great! Now, just work on images, image placement, and text. Make it all work together. ^-^

Foxxer · 07-13-2004, 01:03 AM

They're gone!

Raven · 07-13-2004, 02:01 AM

Ya.. I couldnt' view them. Could you post them to the forum? That'd be gravy. ^_^

WeyrDragon · 07-13-2004, 04:10 AM

lol, why was this brought back up, its almost a year old.

KJ Killa · 07-13-2004, 04:18 AM

I cant see them... :blink:

escaflownemoon · 07-13-2004, 09:47 AM

same here I can't see them. You might wanna upload them here since its easier..I think.

DDR Pip · 07-13-2004, 10:07 AM

Like WeyrDragon said, this is almost a year old. They were probably taken off because of how old it was.

escaflownemoon · 07-13-2004, 02:57 PM

omg who decided to revived this thread. It would help if I read the title.

10-18-2003, 02:41 PM	#1
setsuna Senior Member Last Online: 02-18-2005 07:26 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Total Points: 275.01 Donate Posts: 189 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	OK! This is it.. I am ready for constructive criticism! These are in the order I created them.. First: Sumomo Second: Kotoko Third: Chii&Sumomo Don't flame my poor little self.. please... =^_^=;; __________________ Purple are the color of the clothes I wear, clothes I wear, clothes I wear... My Wallpaper ramblings... (formerly Codename: Sailor Moon)

10-18-2003, 07:14 PM	#2
Omni Member Last Online: 10-31-2003 05:27 PM Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: No where Total Points: 185.00 Donate Posts: 57 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	They're all great, especially the last one. Simplicity at it's best, hehe __________________ <span style='color:gray'>The Ataris.The Used.Taking Back Sunday.The All American Rejects. Saves The Day.A Static Lullaby.Brand New.Green Day.New Found Glory. -- Record Of Lodoss War.Serial Experiments Lain.The Vision Of Escaflowne. Neon Genesis Evangelion.Shadow Skill.Zone Of The Enders.Dragonball Z. -- Ai for admin!</span>

10-18-2003, 08:01 PM	#3
MistressPookyChan ☃ Snowmen! ☃ Join Date: Oct 2003 Location: The 'burbs of Tokyo Age: 28 Gender: Visit MistressPookyChan's Blog View MistressPookyChan's Walls (13) Total Points: 411,545.80 Donate Posts: 5,732 My Mood: My Photos: (11) Rep Power: 1426	1st one: the text is not needed at all, but if you really want to have text, make it smaller. 2nd one: Try to find a larger pic or emphasis the picture that is on there. The pic that you are currently using also doesn't fit the colors in the wallpaper. By changing the hue, you could make make it blend with the background more. 3rd one: again, try to make a little bit of emphasis on the picture so that it looks like it wasnt just C&Ped on there. Now for the better points. ^-^;; The backgrounds themselves are beautiful! the colors are wonderful and the elements are great! Now, just work on images, image placement, and text. Make it all work together. ^-^ __________________ Pink is the new Pooky Party it up in Wallpapers \| join the AF Gaia guild! "Spilt coffee has a sad remembrance of old"- from a plastic bag seen on the train musing of a mod : Illuminated Spirits : Theme: uber_pink

07-13-2004, 02:01 AM	#5
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07-13-2004, 04:10 AM	#6
WeyrDragon Guardian and Protector Last Online: 02-25-2009 01:13 AM Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: Pern, in the Rukbat system Age: 23 Total Points: 588.01 Donate Posts: 484 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 6	lol, why was this brought back up, its almost a year old. __________________

07-13-2004, 01:03 AM	#4
Foxxer Senior Member Last Online: 12-17-2008 10:43 PM Join Date: May 2004 Total Points: 544.00 Donate Posts: 215 My Mood: My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 6	They're gone!

07-13-2004, 04:18 AM	#7
KJ Killa Senior Member Last Online: 05-19-2005 12:00 PM Join Date: Jun 2004 Location: USA CA LA Total Points: 708.60 Donate Posts: 468 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	I cant see them... :blink: __________________

07-13-2004, 09:47 AM	#8
escaflownemoon Senior Member Last Online: 07-15-2009 09:18 PM Join Date: Nov 2003 Age: 24 View escaflownemoon's Walls (1) Total Points: 1,878.00 Donate Posts: 1,444 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 16	same here I can't see them. You might wanna upload them here since its easier..I think. __________________

07-13-2004, 10:07 AM	#9
DDR Pip Member Last Online: 06-14-2007 01:36 AM Join Date: Jun 2004 Total Points: 89.00 Donate Posts: 63 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 0	Like WeyrDragon said, this is almost a year old. They were probably taken off because of how old it was. __________________

07-13-2004, 02:57 PM	#10
escaflownemoon Senior Member Last Online: 07-15-2009 09:18 PM Join Date: Nov 2003 Age: 24 View escaflownemoon's Walls (1) Total Points: 1,878.00 Donate Posts: 1,444 My Photos: (0) Rep Power: 16	omg who decided to revived this thread. It would help if I read the title. __________________

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