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    Default Just a haiku.

    Smile. Look outside,
    Look at the world around you.
    Live. Love. Laugh. Always.


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    Short, sweet, and fulfilling. Just the way a Haiku should be. Nice.
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    it has 16 syllables,does haiku only have 15?
    but,wow! it has such a nice message,good work!
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    Quote Originally Posted by dream magician View Post
    it has 16 syllables,does haiku only have 15?
    but,wow! it has such a nice message,good work!
    A haiku has seventeen, I believe.
    Five,
    Seven,
    Five.
    And with the way I pronounce words... it was seventeen for me.

    Thank you, though. =]


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    Yes..I like this haiku it has meaning!!
    "The moment we connect, eternity will awaken - I long for it"

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    And I must go over still into the darkness of dawn."

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    Quote Originally Posted by vixen_wolf View Post
    :Quote: I love catnip mice...it's why i chew there heads off. there good for breakfast :unQuote: bucky

    :Qoute: 1..2..3..4..5.. that was a haiku a freaky little cat haiku :unQoute: rob

    this is from get fuzzy i love that comic.....its in there first book..bucky is sho cooooool
    What was the point of posting that?

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    such a sweet poem..i loved it!!

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    Quote Originally Posted by ~*Lady_Kikyou*~ View Post
    such a sweet poem..i loved it!!
    I'm glad to hear that! =D


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    seems that you're pretty good at it, Nice poem, just the way haiku's should be
    Thine soul is mine for the keeping
    As a thousand rivers now dividing
    Provides me with that much needed killing!

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    Yeah,i admit i was wrong....even so thank you for correcting me.
    nice haiku,you could be like Basho,you know.
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    Quote Originally Posted by dream magician View Post
    Yeah,i admit i was wrong....even so thank you for correcting me.
    nice haiku,you could be like Basho,you know.

    Not a problem!~ Thank you for ... well ... being nice! =] And I don't really know Basho. ;[


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    Quote Originally Posted by Charmmy View Post
    Not a problem!~ Thank you for ... well ... being nice! =] And I don't really know Basho. ;[
    You could be better than basho. Looking forward to read more sensible haikus from you. Keep it up.! ^^
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    Quote Originally Posted by seraphic_demon View Post
    You could be better than basho. Looking forward to read more sensible haikus from you. Keep it up.! ^^
    Awh, that's really sweet. I still wish I knew him but I'm too lazy to wiki/google/yahoo.

    Tehee.


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