My First Story - Fukagyaku REPLACE

[Haze~]

So the official lyrics are FINALLY out. http://www.kasi-time.com/item-73573.html
http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/nob...akureplace.htm
And since the translit was submitted before that, it was bound to happen. Corrections:

Boku no kage to kasanatte ima
I can't go back.

Kettei teki "boku" no shoumei wa

Jidai wo ima koete monogataru
I will be the brand new age yeah from this day!!

Kill my weakness!! Weakness!!
Kanarazu koete naite satte
And I stay alive!! Stay alive!!
Saigo wo shinjitaku wa nakute
Kill my weakness!! Weakness!!
Itsuka kizuita toshite mo
I will prove myself that I have lived today
Starting now!! (It's a whole stanza, so I don't see why the lines should be separated.)

Kawari hateta keshiki de
Mizukara no sadame shitte mata
We'll carry on!!!

Zettai teki "boku" no sonzai wa
Katachi wo kae ima hibiki wataru

I will be the brand new age yeah from this day!! (Now here it's pretty justified.)

Wake in lonliness!! Lonliness!!
Itsuka taete keshite chitte
Walking after you!! After you!!
Dou natta tte kui wa nakute
Wake in lonliness!! Lonliness!!
Mou wake nanka nakute iino!!
I will prove myself that I have lived today
Starting now!! (Again, a whole stanza.)

I don't know why
But you saved me.
Wherever you came from
feel you inside me.
maybe it's too late
I've decided to live only for you
I will follow you! follow you!
If I die for you
I will lead you! lead you!
For the brighter future
Never fade away! fade away!
keep you close to me! close to me!

Nan nen tatte mo matte mo
Nakusanu you ni dakikakaeta
Zutto kanashikute munashite
Mou saki nante nai kara!
Kill my weakness!! Weakness!!
Kanarazu koete naite satte
And I stay alive!! Stay alive!!
Saigo wo shinjitaku wa nakute
Kill my weakness!! Weakness!!
Itsuka kizuita toshite mo
I will prove myself that I have lived today
Starting now!! (Hmm.. Yup, a whole stanza.)

[EJTranslations]

Hah, I actually just PMed this submitter about this unfortunate habit of his. It's been slipping by me, but he just submitted one for the OP of a show which I'm watching and for which I know the OP single isn't out yet, so it rang alarm bells.

Would you like to give me a full re-transliteration without commentary?

[Haze~]

Sure!

Romaji:

Wake in Loneliness!! Loneliness!!
Falling inside your story
walking after you!! after you!!
I will share my time

Mayoikonda sekai de
Boku no kage to kasanatte ima
I can't go back.

Ketteiteki "boku" no shoumei wa
Jidai wo ima koete monogataru
I will be the brand new age yeah from this day!!

I will save myself
and the time is now!!

Kill my Weakness!! Weakness!!
Kanarazu koete naite satte
And I stay alive!! stay alive!!
Saigo wo shinjitaku wa nakute
Kill my Weakness!! Weakness!!
Itsuka kidzuita to shite mo
I will prove myself that I have lived today
Starting Now!!

Kawarihateta keshiki de
Mizukara no sadame shitte mata
We'll carry on!!

Zettaiteki "boku" no sonzai wa
Katachi wo kae ima hibikiwataru

I will be the brand new age yeah from this day!!

Wake in Loneliness!! Loneliness!!
Itsuka wa taete keshite chitte
walking after you! after you!
Dou nattatte kui wa nakute
Wake in Loneliness!! Loneliness!!
Mou wake nanka nakute ii no!
I will prove myself that I have lived today
Starting Now!!

I don't know why
But you saved me.
Wherever you came from
feel you inside me.
maybe it's too late
I've decided to live only for you
I will follow you! follow you!
If I die for you
I will lead you! lead you!
For the brighter future
Never fade away! fade away!
keep you close to me! close to me!

Nannen tatte mo matte mo
Nakusanu you ni dakikakaeta
Zutto kanashikute munashikute
Mou saki nante nai kara!
Kill my Weakness!! Weakness!!
Kanarazu koete naite satte
And I stay alive!! stay alive!!
Saigo wo shinjitaku wa nakute
Kill my Weakness!! Weakness!!
Itsuka kidzuita to shite mo
I will prove myself that I have lived today
Starting Now!!

Kanji:

Wake in Loneliness!! Loneliness!!
Falling inside your story
walking after you!! after you!!
I will share my time
迷い込んだ世界で
僕の影と重なって　今
I can't go back.

決定的「僕」の証明は
時代を今超えて　物語る
I will be the brand new age yeah from this day!!

I will save myself
and the time is now!!

Kill my Weakness!! Weakness!!
必ず　越えて　泣いて　去って
And I stay alive!! stay alive!!
最後を信じたくはなくて!
Kill my Weakness!! Weakness!!
いつか気付いたとしても
I will prove myself that I have lived today
Starting Now!!

変わり果てた　景色で
自らの運命(さだめ)知って　また
We'll carry on!!

絶対的「僕」の存在は
形を変え今響き渡る

I will be the brand new age yeah from this day!!

Wake in Loneliness!! Loneliness!!
いつかは　絶えて　消して　散って
walking after you! after you!
どうなったって悔いはなくて
Wake in Loneliness!! Loneliness!!
もう理由なんか無くていいの!
I will prove myself that I have lived today
Starting Now!!

I don't know why
But you saved me.
Wherever you came from
feel you inside me.
maybe it's too late
I've decided to live only for you
I will follow you! follow you!
If I die for you
I will lead you! lead you!
For the brighter future
Never fade away! fade away!
keep you close to me! close to me!

何年経っても待っても
失くさぬ様に抱きかかえた
ずっと悲しくて虚しくて
もう先なんてないから!
Kill my Weakness!! Weakness!!
必ず　越えて　泣いて　去って
And I stay alive!! stay alive!!
最後を信じたくはなくて!
Kill my Weakness!! Weakness!!
いつか気付いたとしても
I will prove myself that I have lived today
Starting Now!!

[EJTranslations]

Fixed, thank you!