Originally Posted by
Novak
Great poem, and I like how you managed to make it make sence. I can actually picture whats happening in your poem, thats a plus. Sad poem though indeed, sad or not, it still came out good for you putting rarely little thought in it.
All I have to say is to keep up the good work, you are very good with your words, since I didn't find it confusing at all. Your poetry is really great, I can't wait for you to write another one so I can read it also. Lets shoot for a happy one next time. lol.
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