Pure Heart

[Kaname Shikara]

A poem that popped into my head after thinking about my signature words XD I hope everyone likes it. ^^

Pure Heart

A heart so innocent and true
It doesn't just form out of the blue
It brightens the darkest of clouds
To the full extent of it's allow

Someone tries to imitate that pure heart
With fake actions right from the start
Evil intentions with this false purity
I just wish everyone would be able to see

Deep in your soul, warmness flutters, happiness flows
This pure of heart can do wonders, the purity grows
Deep in their motions, it's all an act, must be put to a stop
This false pretense of actions must soon drop

Warmness flutters
Happiness flows
This pure of heart
Wins because it fits the part
No ill emotions like the fakes who follow it
It's time for that false purity to just quit

Purity comes from the heart
Not the actions that conjure false pretenses

[Anime Forum]

Aww, reading the poem makes me feel warm : ) I liked it! It was really sweet and I'd like you to write some more soon. Sorry if I can't really comment more than that.

[3mO.AnG3L.La3La]

I lov3 your style of poetry, its so warm and bright (haha). you have an amazing gift with words...use it well.

just a fan hoping to see more of your work

[ultra_maniac]

My Apologizes on my knees I am so sorry.

[Kaname Shikara]

@Raiken - I'm glad you like it ^^ I guess I can write more than dark poetry now, I just have to keep refining it and I'll try to get better.

@emo angel - Thank you for that ^^ It made me smile.

@ultra_maniac - Huh? o.o what's wrong? You didn't do anything wrong at all.

[Anime Forum]

@Raiken - I'm glad you like it ^^ I guess I can write more than dark poetry now, I just have to keep refining it and I'll try to get better.

@emo angel - Thank you for that ^^ It made me smile.

@ultra_maniac - Huh? o.o what's wrong? You didn't do anything wrong at all.

No, don't let him off that easy! Take out the whip and make sure this man pays for what he has done!

[Kaname Shikara]

He hasn't done anything. XD

[Rulloxp]

That was really good(: I hope you post more ^.^ Good Work(:!

[-P.N.-]

Good poem, I still like your "dark poem" more ^_^
~P.N.~

[Kaname Shikara]

I'm glad everyone likes it. ^^

[Zandan]

How do you think these up so quickly!? O_o

I've tried to write another poem, and in that time you've written like 4 more...

Very good though. Maybe not as good as some of your 'darker' poems, but good nonetheless. Better than I can do at least.

[Kaname Shikara]

I love writing poetry ^^ one of my friends can write 3 in a day though >.< that's crazy, but it's cool. ^^ You have a lot of talent, don't doubt yourself. Thank you for your comment. ^^

[Zandan]

You want to know what's crazy?

A friend of mine once wrote a 16 page poem....yeah...

[Kaname Shikara]

:O oh wow....who read it? O.o

[Zandan]

I read it, it was weird. It turned from happy-ish to depressing to angry to hungry to nonsense and back to happy-ish....

It was about his 'stages' of getting over a bad break up.

It was a very good poem. I wish I asked him for a copy of it.

[*Tsuki*]

Ah, it's been quite a while since I've read one of your poems, sis, sorry bout that. >.<
It was very nice, but as others have said, it's still not as good as your "darker" poems.
At the moment, I'm not sure what to do to improve so when I think of something I'll be sure to tell you!

Glad that you can still write, sis.
It seems I've come to a standstill. xD

[Anime Forum]

He hasn't done anything. XD

Your lying. Your just being a softy! Do you need the Miz to teach him a lesson he'd never forget?

[Kaname Shikara]

@Zandan - O.O wow, I'm surprised a poem that huge could be that huge ^^ It's like a mini book. ^^

@Tsuki - Sis! It's alright, don't worry about that. ^^
Yes, I know I still need to work on making these types of poems better. ^^

I was stuck before too sis ^^ you just gotta find the right inspiration and cling to it and start writing before it slips away. ^^

@Raiken - He didn't do anything :P so nope, no hurting.

[*Tsuki*]

Haha, yeah. I'll be sure to do so.

@-Raiken-: Bad Raiken! Don't talk about hurtin' people on Kirako's poetry thread. D= She's too nice for that! *whacks him over the head with a rolled up newspaper*

[Zandan]

Haha, yeah. I'll be sure to do so.

@-Raiken-: Bad Raiken! Don't talk about hurtin' people on Kirako's poetry thread. D= She's too nice for that! *whacks him over the head with a rolled up newspaper*

More mixed signals...I thought Kirako bites people...

She said so in Burnt House's introduction thread...

[Kaname Shikara]

More mixed signals...I thought Kirako bites people...

She said so in Burnt House's introduction thread...

I do bite, Zandan just watch out >_> I know when you go to sleep.... *plotting* Then I sweep in like a ninja, bite your arm off, then return home before you wake up....

[*Tsuki*]

O= Oh noes.
Gotta prepare for that. xP

[Zandan]

I do bite, Zandan just watch out >_> I know when you go to sleep.... *plotting* Then I sweep in like a ninja, bite your arm off, then return home before you wake up....

You know when I sleep, huh? I'm the one watching you secretly as you sleep. Good luck catching me when I sleep. If ever...

[Kaname Shikara]

You know when I sleep, huh? I'm the one watching you secretly as you sleep. Good luck catching me when I sleep. If ever...

You know, I'm the same way, good luck with watching what hardly ever happens

[Zandan]

Oh, you'll go to sleep sometime, and I'll be there. I'll watch you sleep Kirako, mark my words.

Wow...I think I just upped the creepy factor.