Opinions please!

[Hiro Of The Dark]

I would love your opinion on this. I'm not very good so I hope you like it! Sorry it's sideways.

[Vintniv]

Its that Mio image, you copied it. It works as a loose copy of it. What are planning on doing, drawing your own stuff, copying things, anime characters, etc?

[IluvAllison]

As someone who never draws I think it looks great! I would like to draw like that ;p If i were to critique anything it would be the shoulder/arm but I leave that up to the experienced drawers.

[Bulf]

Alrighty, here goes.
I turned it so I can see it better, and I can spot a few now.
Firstly her head is a little long, and the top is a bit too flat. I'd say shrink it a little, and start the curve of her head a little earlier. Next is her arm. It just...I don't really understand how it's working. That aside, her shoulder is too high, and the arm is too skinny. Next up, her chest is flat. like literally flat. A few lines should spice that up, but remember women have breasts. They don't have to be big, but they should at least exist And finally, her other shoulder, the one you can barely see. Her clothes kind of seem to mix into it, because there's no lines showing where one ends and the other begins. Her shoulder should've curved at least.

All in all, I'd say you're off to a pretty good start if you've just started eye-tracing/copying/whatever. The first few I did were horrible, but you can only get better with practice! So practice, and take my (rather harsh) critique, and try and improve. You don't necessarily have to redraw the same image, just try practicing for a bit. I know the image you were looking at, so it's not that bad.

PS: never draw on line paper.

[Jozette]

What ralf said... :] I like it though.

[Digimon_Sommelier]

@WindAero : Very artistic piece. Great job, keep it up!


My W-Fi!! It's gone out . . .

[Hiro Of The Dark]

Its that Mio image, you copied it. It works as a loose copy of it. What are planning on doing, drawing your own stuff, copying things, anime characters, etc?

I found that image on google and decided to try and draw it. I haven't drawn my own character yet. I wanna get used to doing things first. When I draw my own I'll be sure to post it on here.

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Alrighty, here goes.
I turned it so I can see it better, and I can spot a few now.
Firstly her head is a little long, and the top is a bit too flat. I'd say shrink it a little, and start the curve of her head a little earlier. Next is her arm. It just...I don't really understand how it's working. That aside, her shoulder is too high, and the arm is too skinny. Next up, her chest is flat. like literally flat. A few lines should spice that up, but remember women have breasts. They don't have to be big, but they should at least exist And finally, her other shoulder, the one you can barely see. Her clothes kind of seem to mix into it, because there's no lines showing where one ends and the other begins. Her shoulder should've curved at least.

All in all, I'd say you're off to a pretty good start if you've just started eye-tracing/copying/whatever. The first few I did were horrible, but you can only get better with practice! So practice, and take my (rather harsh) critique, and try and improve. You don't necessarily have to redraw the same image, just try practicing for a bit. I know the image you were looking at, so it's not that bad.

PS: never draw on line paper.

Thanks! I didnt find it harsh I found it very helpful. Yeah I'm gonna start drawing more when my hand gets better. I hurt it recently haha. I used line paper because I had no sketch book on or computer paper. Like I said I'll get to it when My hand gets better and post it up here. Thanks again!!

[Vintniv]

If you're looking for practice, this might help. Look at people in class, or just around you, then draw them as anime people using that tutorial as a reference to help you organize their faces. I actually NEVER recommend copying another art piece, its better to just do something by what you can see by your own skill.

[Hiro Of The Dark]

If you're looking for practice, this might help. Look at people in class, or just around you, then draw them as anime people using that tutorial as a reference to help you organize their faces. I actually NEVER recommend copying another art piece, its better to just do something by what you can see by your own skill.

Yeah thanks! I'll take a look at this I appreciate this