hi you guys this is an anime im working on! im open to all criticism feel free
Hourglass of Sairia
Brief Story Summary: A girl named Akemi Ai moves from her old town Fort City to a new town called Stoneville with her parents, coming from a rich background Akemi is sent to Stoneheart private school. Just before she goes to school her parents tell her that they will be going on a business trip out of town for a few months, they reluctantly leave her alone with the housemaids. while walking to school a boy on a horse rides past her on his way to school she notices he is wearing the same uniform as her, when she gets to her new school (late) the class stop and look at her clearly unimpressed at her lateness she is told to sit down and take the lecture. Later at lunchtime break she goes to the school courtyard and sees all the students chatting and having a good time, suddenly something catches her attention and she sees the boy she saw on the way to school that morning, he is sitting with a boy and another girl she approaches them and asks for their names and ages they tell her and become quite close, in a week they decide to show Akemi the town and on their tour they meet an old woman with a tiny hourglass placed in the palm of her hand she stops them and asks their names after they all tell her their names she smiles and tips the hourglass upside down everything goes black and white then suddenly a bubble covers the four friends and the old woman reality shifts and pictures start placing themselves outside the bubble the bubble pops and they find themselves standing in an unknown part of their town. Little do they know itís a whole different world.