Only the darkness will know
The truth behind the
Silence of a broken heart.
That is all. =D
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Only the darkness will know
The truth behind the
Silence of a broken heart.
That is all. =D
My Sun and Stars
Moon of my life
Nice me likey
I used to be able to do haikus but I have kinda lost my skill having not done it in so long
I will randomly post bits of poems I thought up on my facebook. This haiku was a poetry challenge started by this one dude. I spent a few minutes on it counting, rhyming, and picking the wording. I am satisfied with it.
My Sun and Stars
Moon of my life
Wow that was actually extremely amazing. Its sort of like those sayings you hear old wise people telling the youth.
Not bad, but the syllables are wrong. It's 5-7-5. Not 7-5-7.
It's nice but as GameGeeks said, the syllables aren't right. It's like an inverse haiku or something.
Tru Fax: Princess Minako wrestled Jesus... and won
It may not be right in the syllables, but it is a good poem! ^^ keep posting more.
Amazing set by Ezza Obsuna ^^
The days fly by and the feelings remain
So far away and causing us pain
That's okay we'll make it through
Soon we'll get to say "I love you" ♥
I am horribly stupid and coming back to this thread. I was writing this poem down and realized what I had done. I apologize. I would have commented on this sooner, but I didn't have any internet last year. Thank you for the complements though. I think we should revive this thread.
My Sun and Stars
Moon of my life
No you're not! You just need a few pointers ^.^I am horribly stupid
Traditionally, a haiku is more nature-related and written in the present tense to capture a moment in time. "Will know" signifies future knowing.
Last edited by Princess Cupcake; 03-29-2012 at 10:41 AM.
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